Again, Jacqueline, that wry humour but Andy's advice is sound...give your readers time and chance to absorb...and there's no doubting your abilities, that's for sure.
HAHAHAHA, yup, sick indeed.
do give your poems time for others to read.
You have a fantastic talent.
Either post one a day, or do a group of these short and amazingly funny ones and let everyone have chance to enjoy them.
What you say is what we all do and are in denial. I'd love you to be at the local, you'd have us roaring with such dry wit.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Georg
PS. con un nombre como Hallenbeck abria pensado que tu eras Sueca, no del pais donde San Martin y Bolivar estuvieron zapateando (LOL)
Regis
Be always safe,
Karen
John
do give your poems time for others to read.
You have a fantastic talent.
Either post one a day, or do a group of these short and amazingly funny ones and let everyone have chance to enjoy them.
What you say is what we all do and are in denial. I'd love you to be at the local, you'd have us roaring with such dry wit.