Video: “Rachmaninov prelude 23-5” by Evgeny Kissin. Enjoy!
Everyday I sit down at the keyboard.
My fingers move frantically as I try
to write about you. Losing the moment
in faraway sunsets -- draped in ochre liner
and indigo brows -- I dream like a child
who wishes for madness to pass over
the night, like lambs to the slaughter of day.
We aren't two peas in a pod, but two
squares of different sizes, butting each others
borders into a wall of our resistance...
Where love finds devotee's hiding in music
of melodious drama, causing kisses
to linger upon lips. There, ever wanting,
tranquility rises like mist in mourning.
I didn't see your note until the second time through reading it. I was surprised to see it there, as that line, as it is written, was my favorite line in the poem and I had not thought of using the other spelling/meaning there. I loved the imagery that simple phrase holds and loved the alliteration of it as well...
Cryssa
Resonated with Rachmaninov since I first heard his music in my teens. Beautiful expression of his passion and palpable sorrow, Sara. Saved.
Thank you...Lin
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
Joy
Cryssa
squares of different sizes, butting each others
borders into a wall of our resistance..."
these lines exemplify the heart of this poem ... good work, Sara ...
Excellent in expression, tone and mood, and a quiet passion coloured with sadness and the knowing of differences.
John
Thank you...Lin
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Happy Easter to you and your family!
Sandie Angel :o)