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Rising off Key
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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Video: “Rachmaninov prelude 23-5” by Evgeny Kissin. Enjoy!




Everyday I sit down at the keyboard.
My fingers move frantically as I try
to write about you. Losing the moment
in faraway sunsets -- draped in ochre liner
and indigo brows -- I dream like a child
who wishes for madness to pass over
the night, like lambs to the slaughter of day.
We aren't two peas in a pod, but two
squares of different sizes, butting each others
borders into a wall of our resistance...
Where love finds devotee's hiding in music
of melodious drama, causing kisses
to linger upon lips. There, ever wanting,
tranquility rises like mist in mourning.


© 2009 Sara Coslett


Note: Mourning spelled as intended.

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 Reviews of "Rising off Key"
Reviewed on June 28, 2009
Absolute magic in this. Loved the music as well.

Reviewed by Joy Marsh
Reviewed on May 1, 2009
Enjoyed reading this poignant and excellent write.
Joy

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
I didn't see your note until the second time through reading it. I was surprised to see it there, as that line, as it is written, was my favorite line in the poem and I had not thought of using the other spelling/meaning there. I loved the imagery that simple phrase holds and loved the alliteration of it as well...
Cryssa

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
"We aren't two peas in a pod, but two
squares of different sizes, butting each others
borders into a wall of our resistance..."

these lines exemplify the heart of this poem ... good work, Sara ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 11, 2009
I feel a soulful longing in this

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 11, 2009
Sara,
Excellent in expression, tone and mood, and a quiet passion coloured with sadness and the knowing of differences.
John

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 11, 2009
Resonated with Rachmaninov since I first heard his music in my teens. Beautiful expression of his passion and palpable sorrow, Sara. Saved.
Thank you...Lin

Reviewed on April 11, 2009
Powerfully poignant, Sara, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on April 10, 2009
There's sadness in this poem, and then there's the longings that cries from the soul. Enjoyed the poem as well as the video!!

Happy Easter to you and your family!

Sandie Angel :o)




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