my creator, me (poem) by Sara Coslett on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2003

"I am that I am". Is that all we have to go on?

Adam

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2003

I love your words.... they were so fluid here and said so much SO well. Your expression astounds me. Teresa

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

4-21-03

I Don't Believe I Just Accept Fact He(God) Exists,You, Humanity, What Can I Say:

"Be Ready" To Meet Your Maker!

TRASK

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Supergirl, You are so awesome--you really are super. You drive a great point about taking up time worshipping a deity when there are so many things to do in ones life. I think a lot of church services are a waste of time as it's some other human telling us how they interpret something--I'd rather just pull out the good book and read it for myself if I felt like it. What if it's all rot? That's one of those deep discussion questions no one has the answer for. J.

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

man this is almost a josie rant. well you missed some cuss words what can i say? well penned super girl. enjoy your freedom.
josie

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Very good, Super Girl. I think of consciousness of going through stages. As more and more people develop a higher state of consciousness, the world becomes more harmonious. That's what it's all about. "The Kingdom of God" is just a metaphor for the final stage right here on earth--the way John Lennon envisioned it.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

i will not judge...but i believe that we were created...i am not evolved from a dang monkey! powerful write, super girl...thank you for sharing what you feel. i may not agree, however, you are free to express your belief...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Very strong believe on own creation.....If I had the obility I would of created two of a kind......don't you think that would be heavenly fun.....one for you and one for me.....lets make it three.....and one go sit in the corner till we need some fun...hehehe more.....Nice Idea!!!
So Super Girl lets start to create.....hey only joking okay!!!!

Love
tinka

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

We are supposed to worship the creator.
Well, probably if I knew you better. :)
I do know you create beautiful poetry, and I like this.
Things are created, life evolves.
Perhaps we are not just in the Author's Den, but in His/Her mind.
John

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

lol..strong sentiments, super girl. we're each entitled to what we believe, and you have expressed your 1st amendment rights forthrightly! hear hear!