first kiss (poem) by Sara Coslett on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

My first kiss was a disaster... financially as well as mentally and emotionally... she was an exotic dancer i hired to come over and dance... I was an 18 year old virgin ...Anyway I couldn't really afford such a luxury at the time. I had just moved out on my own and my budget was tight. I was drunk and all I remember was that I kept missing the rhythm of the kiss and knocking my mouth into hers and... it was really a mess! But I'll never forget what I do remember about it... because it was my first.

Adam

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2003

Ohhhhh what a DELICIOUSLY SUPERB WRITE of just what a first kiss is like!!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2003

melting....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 11, 2003

With my first kiss I held my breath sooo long I almost got a blackout...Sweetest memory ever....glad I don't have to hold my breath anymore .....now I breath freely....
Thanks for sharing
Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

Okay !!!

Reviewed by Frank Williams (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

Very hot poem.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

wow...lovely write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

This was lovely, that first kiss, such a memory,

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

Dear Sara, Lovely reflective poem.

tony

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

5-10-03

Bio: Your Little Girl Photo Looks As Much Like My Little Girl Poem (Like Twins)Holding That Lady Bug In Her Little Hands_ Past Unto Future_

Kiss 1st Time: **Could I Go Back In Time:

Read My Poem I Can't Stop Tear's:

(See Her Photos . My Web Sites)I Would go Back to See Her Peggy,Again I'd Be Holding Her So Close,I 'd Feel Her Hand Not Letting Go Of Mine, Smelling Clean Scent of Her Long Brown Hair In My Face, I'd Be Dancing With Her Forever In My Mind,Then I'd I'd Be Kissing Her For That 1st Time,I'd Be 23 Forever Not Separated By Mere Molecules,i.e.

I'd Give The(My) 2001 Poem_
I Can't Stop The Tear's...

__This Will Give You, Everybody Something To Really Think About Real Hard...

Tear's, TRASK

** I Believe I Can & Will ( Go Back)Do It...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

you have captured the anticipation marvelously...

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

The lips pucker up in anticipation. :) Very romantic.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 10, 2003

OH.... this is such a TASTY penning. The anticipation! Mmmmmmm, like that main course but you haven't even started on dinner...priceless moment!

Thanks...Teresa