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Have You Met My Friend Courage (another epigram attempt)
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For another friend.

I wrote the first version in haste. Upon reflection I thought it might not be poetic enough. So I offer my second version for your judgement.

 


 


First attempt


Only cowards resort to whacks
If you meet one think hard and decide
Is it time to be a coward and attack
Or simply pack your bags and take a ride


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Second attempt


The coward has an affair with fifty whacks
Smiling, you think hard and decide
The courage of a thousand women
Is my lover, as I pack my bags and take a ride


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 Reviews of "Have You Met My Friend Courage (another epigram attempt)"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
I prefer the first one
Nico

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
I like the first one better because
"Is it time to be a coward and attack"
is a powerful thought

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
7-20-03

Say Just Whack It Off!

TRASK

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
I did not fully understand the meaning; or so I think.. I would say regaulating the syllabic meter in an epigram is 'de rigeuer'.. Balance is most imortant in meaning, music and mood (as expressed by diction).

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Both are good. I like the first the best.
Cowards usually run and hide.

Reviewed by David Knight
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Both are good and make their point, but I feel you did improve.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
both are excellent! though the first one flows a bit better...

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
I think the first drives the point home more succinctly. Both are fine posts.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
They are both Super and you Girl really
go;-) first is a tad better;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Wow I like them both!!
Whacko write Girl!!

Love
tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
I like them both...
TOO
PJ

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
I like them both too....tho I sorta love the first best..Thanks, Dani

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
I like both of them and you get fifty love taps each!


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