I wrote the first version in haste. Upon reflection I thought it might not be poetic enough. So I offer my second version for your judgement.
First attempt
Only cowards resort to whacks If you meet one think hard and decide Is it time to be a coward and attack Or simply pack your bags and take a ride
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Second attempt
The coward has an affair with fifty whacks Smiling, you think hard and decide The courage of a thousand women Is my lover, as I pack my bags and take a ride
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Reviews of "Have You Met My Friend Courage (another epigram attempt)"
I did not fully understand the meaning; or so I think.. I would say regaulating the syllabic meter in an epigram is 'de rigeuer'.. Balance is most imortant in meaning, music and mood (as expressed by diction).
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2003
Both are good. I like the first the best.
Cowards usually run and hide.
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"Is it time to be a coward and attack"
is a powerful thought
Say Just Whack It Off!
TRASK
Cowards usually run and hide.
go;-) first is a tad better;-)
Whacko write Girl!!
Love
tinka
TOO
PJ