One minute you are begging to be wild and free The next you are talking about marrying me You spend so much time reinventing the game That you forget what was your last name So I teach you…and you teach me, As we both teach…all of humanity And through the swirling ethereal mist Our love just slowly…and oh so sweetly drifts As we try to skirt life’s responsibilities Like a butterfly flirting with ecstasy’s possibilities Occasionally you and I bump up against the dark Looking for the treasure map on the road we embark Our dreams are filled with a never-ending eternity As hostility trips us…in and out of joyous synchronicity So darling, my love…please listen to what I have to say Even though my heart feels so completely betrayed If you really want to play some more Just remember not to look like a whore
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Reviews of "Shadows In The Dark"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
Oh Oh.
Strong words. Did he read them?
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
Terrific last line, Super Girl, a very surprising conclusion to an excellent write!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
WOW, Supergirl this is SO VERY EXCELLANT!!!! Such brilliant truth radiating real wisdoms on and of life!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
I ain't no whore......that I can promise you......but I will not lie if I tell you I am in love with my dream......and that might make me look like one!!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Sometimes I think I look like a whore bum?
This is a well thought out write.............
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
We all are whores of some kind.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Supergirl,,,
Hey I am so glad yes you have love.....
And it is so wonderful when you do find that one that makes it alright...
Excellent write....
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Strong words. Did he read them?
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
~Chrissie
I ain't no whore......that I can promise you......but I will not lie if I tell you I am in love with my dream......and that might make me look like one!!
This is a well thought out write.............
Hey I am so glad yes you have love.....
And it is so wonderful when you do find that one that makes it alright...
Excellent write....
PJ
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Jack