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Oceanic Revelry
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
  
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Floating in pristine turquoise waters
Whose bounty never falters
A slice of life within the Caribbean Sea,
I dream of you along side me

~*~

Multicolored fish of all sizes and shapes
Dart in and out of the shipwrecks littering the ocean floor
As ballyhoo with their long pointy snouts swim by my face
And yellow tail snappers school below
Flowing to the rhythm of the sea
When suddenly the sun peeks out from the partly cloudy skies
Revealing a myriad of colored coral heads and fans in yellow, pink and purple
While electric blue parrotfish munch away
Carefully avoiding spiny black sea urchins larger than soccer balls on steroids
Yellow and black striped Sergeant Majors inspect my hands for food
While a stingray burrows in the soft sand
Anemones cling to the rocks fluttering in the current
As translucent brown squid ripple by and by
An oceanic life in its struggle to survive
Creating an underwater revelry
That I was lucky enough to see
While snorkeling in the most splendid waters that can be
St. Maarten, in the Netherland Antilles



Photo courtesy of the best gift my husband ever bought me, an underwater digital camera.



 


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 Reviews of "Oceanic Revelry"
Reviewed on March 26, 2005
Sara,

You didn't need the camera to capture the beauty through your words--thank you, and I didn't even get wet! LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on September 2, 2003
Your descriptions were so vivid it was like swimming along with you in this beautiful underwater world. Lovely scenery you have painted with your words.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Wow!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much for this...the poem and picture!!!!Eye candy and mind candy
dolce!!!
lol
pax
A

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Sounds divine Sara....Your poem paints a fantastic portrait ...thus we see through your eyes. A beautiful and most colourful picture too.

I've always wanted to go scuba-diving...but I'm a big chicken head....(sharks) lol We seem to have an abundance of them around at the moment...But the thrill of diving at The Great Barrier Reef.....or Ningaloo Reef over here is still very encouraging. Glad you're not only having fun...but also taking us along for the ride.


Thanks ......Dani

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Makes me want to take a vacation. However just joining you in yours via your beautifully crafted poem was a great enjoyment.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Captured it well.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Wonderful write and photo exceptional! Was there in 1969. Wonder how its changed?
Hope your fun continues!;-)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Magnificent, Sarah! My god, but this is about as inspired a write as I've read in quite a while.. the pic is glorious.. but to read this great poem is to be in the company of someone who has been there and has the talent to bring us there too.Wow! I especially loved this phrasing: "underwater revelry".. blew me away! So cool! love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
This is just awesome Sara!!

Welcome back!!

Next time take me with okay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Wonderful images and a fabulous photo..well done!
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Hi Super:
Great write. Sounds like you are enjoying yourself. Such a beautiful description.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 1, 2003
Sounds like a wonderful time! Vivid images you have brought to light here. Great write and I enjoyed the trip. ~SH~


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