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Red Blues
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Nothing to live for anymore

Now that he’s gone and slammed the door

Yes, I know people will say,
“that’s not true .”

“It will all get better in a year or two."

“So quit being so damn blue.”


But right now I can only see

Hopelessness engulfing me.

Drowning my soul, in a ferrous pool of red.

Believing I have no future ahead.

Luring me, to the life of the dead.


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 Reviews of "Red Blues"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
I can understand your feelings so well.
But reread what Jay wrote: his comment is excellent. Purple is the color of hope and passion. And also you will feel it again one day.
Nico

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Sweet Sara.. I say, go for the wallowing, immerse yourself.. THEN: do exactly what Lisa says and party! Once it sinks in that you're worth 50 of him, that ole smile will brighten your face and you'll be rolling along, singin' your song again! Be well, sweetie pie. love, katy xox.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
I have two words Sara.....

RETAIL THERAPY!!.....shop till ya drop babyyy.. then get up an do et again! Emotive poem.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Cry and cry until you say, "Fuck him".

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2003
Don't listen to the rest of these well-wishers, Super Girl, you just go right ahead and have your heartbreak, God know, you deserve it.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Hey Sara....didn't i just invite you to set your spirit free for one moment with me....that is my new theropy if I get the same blues as you...I will close my eyes and dream....even if they are not ANSWERED...for that one single moment I feel better....and then I just lift my head and pray for the answer will come!!

Remember I know how you feel sweetie....Oh God don't I know!!

Come on now.....
Only for a moment…
Come inside my soul…


Set Your Spirit Free

Only for a moment
Close your eyes… and come with me
And feel the gentle breeze
Set your spirit free
Feel the warm embrace
In the hour of loneliness
Look at the beauty my eyes see
And feel the joy…
Fill your soul
Listen to the music…
Can you feel the outline of my heart?
Can you feel the gentle breeze?
Only for a moment…
Come inside my soul…
Hold my hand and close your eyes
And set your spirit free
Just for a little while
Leave this world behind
And see the vision…
Of love and beauty
Only for this moment… in time
Lets close our eyes…
And love each other
And set our spirits free
Forever MORE!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
No Super Girl ... there is always another one just around the corner. Walk with your head up though ... you don't want to kill yourself over the next one or to kill him. Expression and release is good for the soul.
Now don't you feel better. If not try Poppa Bills love potion number nine. Guaranteed to make a difference in your life. Bill

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Very touching write. Hope it IS fictional..
Jenni

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Super! This is not you! You are Super Girl. You make your own way in this world. You reach out and grab life and you don't turn it loose for anything! Rise up to meet this with the strength of ten women. You will win!
Best regards with great respect,
Leland

Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Hi Super Girl:

Hope this was fictional. If not...then start living for YOURSELF from now on for you are a very important person. There's lots of things for you to do in the future.

A very expressive write. Emotions well-displayed!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Ain't no man worth all that. We live, we love, we hurt, and then we party like hell and find another! Snap out of it! You are stronger than you think! Lisa


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