I don’t know who will read these words
To search them hard for meaning
As I struggle to make you feel with me
The Simpler Childhood days.
Mango trees and Coconut fronds
Waving their little bellies in the tropical breeze.
The gentle rain that touched my tongue
To engrave a cacophony of voices.
And the smell of the sea, salty and fresh
Where it touches the sky.
But now I have become alienated ,
Just like the yellow canary bird
That responds and follows the song of another
And flies right into a trap ,
And will forever regret
Following the song of the mate.
Now I understand how that yellow bird must have felt
After loosing its cherished freedom ,
To sing again and again
To lure the next unsuspecting bird .
Part Two Of The Series Of Poems :MEMORIES OF HOME..Dedicated To The Memory Of My Mother..Mrs Margaret Ellen Dedei Addo...1914-2002
well written. thank you for the comments on "Among Shadows." I never thought that story would scare that many people -- it is one of those atmospheric style of gothic tales.
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2002
Beautiful...touched my heart. I will be back to read more of your work.
Sharon;)
don't know how i missed you...i am in awe of your words sweetly, softly flowing...with a deep unmarked emotion possibly (bitter/sweet)
Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2002
Wooooo Hoooo! Wonderful! :)
Reviewed by fare good (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2002
A man with a thousand voices that sings the songs of the ancestors,dreams of the pass, the cross that survey the words of love.
Reviewed by christine phillips (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
I fell in love and mourned your poem. Such beautiful imagery and then again there is a twist of pain and harness of reality. Superior writing.~ciao, christine
Aawww, the sweet days of childhood; I do remember! I can feel the sand between my toes and the salt air in my hair. Wonderful memories! Beautiful poem.
Beautifully written and at a perfect pitch of flowing words - Ron
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
the words are the tools.. what you have expressed here is beyond words.. and soooo beautifully! very moving.. it drew me back for another read. just lovely. katy.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
Somtimes our pens bleed pure heart.....Just beautiful..Thanks, Dani
oh, how beautifully this speaks...how 'time' and 'loss' can make one wonder? search?
also, just a painting of a place ... a time... a heartache? I truly found this so beautiful...and just, a special thanks...this, yes..
Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
I liked this very much, it's hard not too long for the days when life seemed innocent.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
Ideas mix so well and the changes are excellent. Bill
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2002
"To sing again & again to lure the next unsuspecting bird." How incredibly sad. This was a moving write. Thank you for it.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2002
Beautiful tribute and thanks for sharing your memories.
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Now I understand how that yellow bird must have felt
After loosing its cherished freedom ,
Thank you for your kind comment on my short story "Claire's French Recipe" ...
Sharon;)
also, just a painting of a place ... a time... a heartache? I truly found this so beautiful...and just, a special thanks...this, yes..
for those days to return in your
words. You write from the heart...
Incredible!