weird (poem) by Patricia Gomes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mike Ill (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

i felt i was reading bukowski himself at some points. well done!

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

You, always get to me...
Hell, if I was a guy...I'd be there, well, I am here at least as a fan and I would sit and listen to you for hours....uh...they will come, geez, Pat, Look at you, And if they seek Genius...I DON'T THINK YOU HAVE A WORRY...funny, before I read this, this is something I am so glad that you wrote, as, okay...well, am I the only one attracted by a kind of genius...heck, Liam Neeson? (okay, so he's gorgeous, but what an actor, same as Crowe...Gary Oldman? ...Oh, you know...Obviously!!!)
um, U2's Bono is one of my fave poets/lyrics, but poetry, still...( but married) and John Lennon is, um, dead...and mostly, Oh, heck...JUST YOU ROCK, WOMAN!!!!!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Patricia...you blew me away with this one...fantastic girl...I love all of those artists too...my heroes...you are included...Floria

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

you mean they arent flocking to you already?
this is fantastic!!!

Reviewed by William M. Sowman

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

Pat...I posted a tribute for you. A welcome to the AD. Bill

http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=50967

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 3, 2003

Patricia, yes it is genius that attracts others to the poets and artists and one of great talent. Just as your poetry attracts those like me, who bow at your magnificence.
Your work will survive the way theirs has. You have the gualities needed to climb the highest poetic mountain. From your very first poem I have love and admired your work and this poem is no different. The ones who come to you here now, are more perceptive then the average AD member. They see you as I do. On the road to success. It will be terribly to me if you never make it. I love you. Bill

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Wowie!! Feel like I've been dipped into a bubbly-clear well of words...I need to catch my breath and ponder on this quenching! :)

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

I enjoyed those artist works you mentioned eat, paint and be merry great work !

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

They use pennies to hold lids closed in hospitals;-)Great write P.! I agree with JudeAce...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

the artistic mind has its own flair and power to attract...

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Not only will they come to you, but they will be the ones with intelligence who understand the beauty of your words and who will see into you. Fantastic poem.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

glorious words, and generations of poets to come will not only read them, love them and speak them softly, they will wonder about the same things

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Excellent write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

A great write for all of us whose writings have often been passed off as nothingness. May God Bless you and all here at Author's Den who so cheerfully welcome all of our viewpoints, regardless of what they may be.
Keep up the good work!
Jill

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Fantastic write.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

I could read your work all day. Wonderful.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Wow! Sheer excellence here. Fantastic write.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

I like Charles Bukowski too! ~ and the modern poets who likes to use metaphors have Picasso's spirit in them.

Good write and very interesting piece!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Be encouraged, they will!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

As always, this is one great write, and why for so many years my wife did not want me to write. Young girls, older women, even some men in comfortable shoes, waited on each word that I would type. Alas.... she has allowed me the right to write once more, now that the door to my heart has been sealed shut, closed forever. Sad but true.