Give me Credence (poem) by Patricia Gomes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Especially more so because I tend to dislike too obvious poetic play, but this works, works, works, and I'm won.

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

P.Gomes,
I both with nod, bow, smile and salute, do deem it done...
Rodney

Reviewed on March 15, 2003

Love it, oooh, yes...again..god, I was smiling in recognition of the 'ghosts' and the why do we, etc...and Oh, YOU are ...memorable!
wasn't it old Bill S. that said, er, 'What's in a name' (well, HIS LAST NAME WASN'T LESCHI (and pronounced Lesky Less-key?)
Oh, Damn, either way, this seemed as if those ghosts had to run to get out of the way, YOU MAKE IT LOOK SO EASY!
Really enjoyed the style, quick and with wit and commas? ahhhhh! Patricia Gomes, oh!
really needed this, Thank You++++

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2003

Talk about funny last names? what are you trying to say would you rather be stuck with a name like Lupinacci.

Pat this was great I felt like I was on a an E ticket ride in Disney world

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

It never hurts as bad if a stranger judges.....Hey Kid ;p You have this poetry scene sorted! Loved this.... fresh and very unique!! Thanking you, Dani

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

somehwat of a spit it out rap flow of poetics.
Good.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

I just love this form of poetry, I love how it flows so beautifully, just an excellent poem!

Reinder

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

You certainly have my respect and approval out here in cyberland.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Trade you your last name for my initials. And we may be faceless, but we all have personalities and honest natures. I your stuff wasn't worth reading, none of us would be reading it. So, 2 for us, 0 for you. You have to stay. BAD

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

This is excellent please continue your words are powerful.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

Pat the laughter in my heart is not at you but with you. I love everything about you; everything you say and do. Nothing will let you drop threw the notch so long as I am alive. Your last name may be funny to you, pero a mi es muy glorioso! Tu va a quedar en mu corazon por siempre Nunca voy a ovidarte. Guillermo. !Abrazos y besos!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

Hey, cyber ghosts can sometimes suprise us with honesty. Like this. This poem is geat. Loved ever line.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

Hahaha I loved this...I loved the last few lines...great write...Now I have to go and see what the heck that poetry form is that you want us to write...it sounds difficult...I will write you...Love this poem..Floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

You are a wonder P.love the write!

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

This is a great write! Loved the use of the lone "ly" in the 5th line. I'm sure you've missed a comma somewhere though (j/k) Enjoyed this! Mal.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

If you talk to Phamtom Pheonix, he will tell you I collect comma buttons. This is fine work. Really enjoyed reading it.

~E

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

GREAT WRITE!!!! I LIVED IT AND LOVED IT. THANKS FOR SHARING. WOW!!!