Rules to live by… (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 14, 2004

Revealed here is the "blood of sweat" that is poured out not just to enrich your own life, but also to bring colour and meaning to the many others who are touched by your words and your beautiful intentions. Your kindness shines out. Wonderful KB

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 14, 2004

AND YOU MY FRIEND
ARE THE PICASSO OF POETRY
THIS IS LOADED WITH WISDOM
YOU ARE READY FOR THE HUNT

WILLIAM.... PEACE

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2004

Love this line..Demolish the mansion of falsehood,
with the bull-dozer of truth.
excellent Bhuwan

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2004

"You are the Picasso of your own life." This is absolutely brilliant.

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2004

wonderful !! "Add meaning to your life,
by subtracting the egos one by one" my fav rule :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

This is such wisdom and it is expressed in such a beautiful manner, Bhuwan. Love and peace to you, my friend. Regis

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Wise advice so beautifully given and the last verse ends it brilliantly.
Andrea

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Superb write Bhuwan. So much depth to your words

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Brilliant write, reminds me of St Fransis's poem..

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

An exquisite piece Bhuwan. One revealing of a beautiful soul.
Peace and Blessings my friend. Mikii

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

An exception philosophical piece. Well done!
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

as the surfers would say here..."you rule, dude"
hee hee...i say very good.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Demolish the mansion of falsehood,
with the bull-dozer of truth.

Awesome words and thoughts, Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Bhuwan, this was just so good. As I read I kept envisioning this artist standing on the side of the river painting the skyline...Excellent write. Lisa

Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Bhuwan
This is carved by the master of your intellect...It is inspiring and a delight to read...Great composition!
Sincerely
Antoinette

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Expressed by one who knows truth and practices wisdom, Brilliant write Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

PHILOSOPHICAL work of great depth, excellent couplets..Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Beautiful rules to live by Bhuwan. Very creative. Just lovely.
Perhaps...one day.

Love, Bonnie