When I die
I want to be cremated
In the banks of river, “ Bagmati”
Beneath the vigilant eyes of, “Pashupati”
And want my ashes scattered
In the barren land of disparity
And may be one-day
Flowers will grow there
And birds will come around
To relish it’s sugared virginity
And bees will come around
To drink the nectar of immortality
And Angels will come around
Straight from the mighty Heaven
To caress it, to feel it, to kiss it
And request its hand for the matrimony.
The blood of the saints truly makes the ground sacred... but the life and breath of the saints consecrate the world in which they already move and have their being. We are all made the better just for being able to count you as our friend, Bhuwan. You are already more than a blessing to those who are fortunate to have you as their Friend, Brother and Father. Go placidly, and very safely! LOL Kate xx
What a lovely delicate vision. People like you must live a very long life for the sake of all of us and for the sake of the birds and flowers and Angels you generate IN LIFE. Yet your lines are so irresistibly beautiful. What a lovely flowering and faith in love. An immortal love that never dies and goes on flowering and flowering.
Beautifully and emotionally penned, may all your wishes and requests be fulfilled, but certainly not for a long time yet, as Peggy says you are much needed right here. Take care and God bless.
warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2004
Bhuwan,
This is beautiful and we prayer and we wish and we have faith and it is so,.'
Excellent Poem but not for a long time my sweet friend your needed to much here. The baes and us.
You leave your wish of unending love in the words you write, and I'm sure your feelings are true to your heart. This is a tender and loving poem, wanting to leave behind a symbol of that love to all humanity. But I'm in agreement with everyone else here: No Rush!
don't know if i want to be cremated or not; i want to enter heaven with all my original parts! i am in enough pain now as i live; why would i want to be burnt up when i die?? NOT good!
still a good write; and you are lookin' good, bhuwan!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
sounds wonderful, but please not for some time yet. i very much enjoy your writing, bhuwan
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2004
Bhuwan, hopefully you’ll be around for many more years to come my friend. No one could ever doubt what your wishes are, and I am sure the Angels will come and pay homage to you for all of your worthy deeds. An exceptional creation from your Master quill and gentle spirit. Thank you for sharing your invaluable time and work. Take care and be well.
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What a lovely delicate vision. People like you must live a very long life for the sake of all of us and for the sake of the birds and flowers and Angels you generate IN LIFE. Yet your lines are so irresistibly beautiful. What a lovely flowering and faith in love. An immortal love that never dies and goes on flowering and flowering.
Tarek
"a wise man neither seeks nor avoids death" Buddha ...
excellent poem!
great poem!
Beautifully and emotionally penned, may all your wishes and requests be fulfilled, but certainly not for a long time yet, as Peggy says you are much needed right here. Take care and God bless.
warm hugs
Elga
This is beautiful and we prayer and we wish and we have faith and it is so,.'
Excellent Poem but not for a long time my sweet friend your needed to much here. The baes and us.
HUGS Lots of Love
LP
What a wonderful photo.!...and I like the poem too.
Sandie May Angel
Carmen :-)
(Karen you return to ashes and put on immortality;-)
still a good write; and you are lookin' good, bhuwan!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
But my ashes must be scattered upon the ocean!!
Be well Bhuwan!!
Love Tinka
Immortal love never dies..
Peter