Make me immortal (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Robert Fullerton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2005

How very fine...lovely write...Thanks..........Bob

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 12, 2005

Bhuwan,

Stunning art and masterfully created write - breathtaking!!

Best regards,

Robert

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2005

Beautiful picture and wonderful work.

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on December 26, 2004

Fantastic writing. Such a vivid picture and powerful few words.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on December 26, 2004

Awesome picture and poem! Thank you!

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on December 26, 2004

Dear Bhuwan,

An extremely powerful write Bhuwan. Imortality lies within your own thoughts and prayers, and in his eyes you are immortal, as he holds you in his arms constantly. My apologies for being so late but I will still convey my blessed Christmas Greeting to you and yours.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on December 25, 2004

merry x mas B. quite a request. g

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 25, 2004

Prayerfully powerful, Bhuwan. Thank you for sharing this offering. Best wishes of love and peace to you, my friend. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

Powerful write Bhuwan!!

Merry Christmas my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

short and powerful write Bhuwan, my friend
Happy Holidays you and your family

William .... peace

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

or to recognize your immortality ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Man Will Never Become Immortal Until He Stops His Own (Others)Never Ending Sin--You All Are Held Just As Guilty In The Eye's Of (God,i.e.SIN!

Credit For Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Peace and blessings Bhuwan to you and your family this season and always.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

a lovely write...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

A lovely poem and picture, Bhuwan. And a Joyous Holiday Season to you and the children.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Beautiful thoughts.... Happy Holiday!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Bhuwan,
Definitely from the heart. Happy Holidays to you an yours, my friend.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Simply stunning, - a whole kernal of truth in a poetic nutshell! A beautiful spin on the mental pictures of the Baby Jesus that we have at this time of the year. May you, the kids, and especially Ram, experience the truth of your own words - today and ever more... immortality starts today and is to be lived NOW!! LOL - in my heart and prayers as always, Bhuwan xx

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Beautiful Bhuwan, simply lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on December 21, 2004

Very nice.

Reviewed by Shezray Faisal

Reviewed on December 21, 2004

This is soo deep and so beautiful. Merry Christmas to everybody out there, may it be a lovely one.
~shezz

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 21, 2004

Bhuwan you are incredible. Your thoughts always inspired
by the divine! Immortal indeed;-)! May you be blessed this Christmas and always!