Envious enemies we often meet
They make our living tough
Can be turned to eternal friends
If we love them much
Rough roads we often travel
That makes our walking harsh
Can be the road towards success
If we walk with a resolute heart
Bad memories we often recall
That makes our present dull
Can be effortlessly forgotten
If we keep on dreaming much
Failures we often fear much
That makes our life horrible
Can be twisted into victory
If we spray labor with trust
Eternal hate we often face
That makes our soul a mess
Can be formatted with joy
If we walk in the path of love
Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "If we walk in the path of love"
Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2003
Wow, beautiful and inspiring piece! :) thanks for sharing it with me. You are very talented, and I want to thank you again for sharing all these beautiful workings with all of us on AD. :) truly awesome.
~Kari~
Reviewed by Lucy Edwards
Reviewed on January 22, 2003
I am so glad you wrote this. You make my job fun, btw said twice thought many times.
Life is a gravel road and we get many pebbles in our feet along the way but it is worth the walk for the love we share and the friends we meet along life's way. If we share our hearts, love grows. Thank you Bhuwan for this poem and all the others. Thank you, also for the wonderful reviews.
--susan
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
We have a choice: to walk the path of love or the path of fear. Very good.
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
I've taken so many paths...all down the wrong road. Good write...
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
It seems such a simple concept - I cannot understand why it seems so difficult for some people to understand. Thank you for helping to spread the seed. Love and light, Tien
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Lovely picture and great idea expression. Really profound. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Wise yes, lovely too there is a rhythm in here that works very well.
Timeless wisdom and advice on the art of living for today’s young and old: The art of thinking, the art of loving, the art of working, the art of leadership, the art of growing old.
A new translation by Sergio E. Serrano of this inspirationa
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
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--susan