Her long dark hair, bounced through the breeze,
Strong galloping legs, pounding to the ridge,
Thick trees cloaked the ridges, valleys and the rest,
of life enriched by the golden sun inside the loves nest
The rain, when it poured, quenched not the fire
burning in her heart, which warmly smoldered with love.
For her noble steed, fearless but gentle,
His grace gleamed like the heaven above
He understood her and she him,
whenever they sheltered beneath a tree
or ventured off track on his or her whim,
nothing else mattered being together and free.
Her heart felt things that her eyes couldn’t saw
and things that her mind couldn’t understand
Her radiant love for him made her heart busy
by then they were each other's prime necessity
To the ultimate question of her curious life
He was the permanent answer
and to the infinite problem of his solitary life
She was the final solution
Their love for each other will forever remain like this
for what's in their mind may escape, but what's in
Their heart will remain forever, it is written by fire,
forever branded in the loves shelter of the mind.
Their heavenly love distills desire upon their eyes
two minds but a single thought, two hearts but
A single beat, they are growing along with age
inside their love crammed charismatic cage
Whatever our souls are made of, theirs are the same
They wished for nothing beyond their smile
and to saunter together, hand in hand
along the sun warmed, love bordered path.
He is free to love her and she is free to love him
this is the story of their heavenly love
and though they may not forever exist
their love will make them eternal forever
Sunlight dances through the lovely leaves
silken zephyr swirls the sighing trees
Lying in the green warm grasses of faith
They felt the loves sun above their face
Time will never touch them, here in their rest
nothing else matters, except their love for them.
Their love is true , not even the wide fissure
Can detach the bond of their eternal desire
WOW!!! so good, bhuwan! as you put it, "love and luck"! god bless you, my poetic friend! love from america, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) to you, bhuwan! :)
Love and romance is so underrated -- and your words sends shivers down this girls spine... never spoken better, thre's been no other words ever put together like this, to create such a tender surreal piece.
Very sweet, beautiful craftmanship -- and nice heart. A poet with heart and dreamlike vision.
My favorite stanzas:
Sunlight dances through the lovely leaves
silken zephyr swirls the sighing trees
Lying in the green warm grasses of faith
They felt the loves sun above their face
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2003
Bhuwan,
Just loving
"Their love for each other will forever remain like this
for what's in their mind may escape, but what's in
Their heart will remain forever, it is written by fire,
forever branded in the loves shelter of the mind. "
beautiful write. love n cheers Peg
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Lady G.
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excellent write
William
Chrissie
Very sweet, beautiful craftmanship -- and nice heart. A poet with heart and dreamlike vision.
My favorite stanzas:
Sunlight dances through the lovely leaves
silken zephyr swirls the sighing trees
Lying in the green warm grasses of faith
They felt the loves sun above their face
Just loving
"Their love for each other will forever remain like this
for what's in their mind may escape, but what's in
Their heart will remain forever, it is written by fire,
forever branded in the loves shelter of the mind. "
beautiful write. love n cheers Peg
God bless,
Tim
You are a true romantic
heart!!! Love and Luck
my friend.
Jill