She leant against my wide shoulder;
the divine insignia of lover’s shelter
then closed her eyes and took a nap
amid the long-drawn-out semi light.
I whispered a spongy tune in her ear
She listened with a jolly countenance
I told her of the love and its dynamism
Happily she nodded with appreciation
I breathed in her ear, the air of fresh love,
Which completely invigorated her heart
Then I tickled her essence with my love
and swiftly she discerned our love for us
Tears of happiness fell through her eyes
Tears as regal and precious as river Nile
Along with her, I too cried but with pride
for I am her song and she - the rhythm of my life
She moaned with pity and everlasting delight
She grasped me and held me tightly as in fright
She gazed me with those anxious bright eyes
Then I heard her breathe my name aloud
I appeased her fear and calmed her down
Then pressed her with humble embrace
And told her that our true love for us
Like the soul would never crumble
Oh! Bhuwan this is the most amazing part......you are a real REAL GENTLE MAN...this came from the Gods of heaven my friend
Tears of happiness fell through her eyes
Tears as regal and precious as river Nile
Along with her, I too cried but with pride
for I am her song and she - the rhythm of my life
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2003
that was so beautiful nice job on this fantastic poem
I breathed in her ear, the air of fresh love,
"Which completely invigorated her heart
Then I tickled her essence with my love
and swiftly she discerned our love for us"
Bhuwan,beauty of verse with noble sentiments of true love ...Well done again!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
{{{BHUWAN}}}}}}}}}
"I appeased her fear and calmed her down
Then pressed her with humble embrace
And told her that our true love for us
Like the soul would never crumble "
THIS IS LOVEA {{and you capture it so well every word.}}}}
Hugs n luck my friend bravo Peggy
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Hi Bhuwan, Wow you are on some winning streak my friend. Another winning, and great writing.
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heart, my friend. May you and
your love always feel this way.
Love n Luck :)
so intimate and loving
you got me sighing!!!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
and then some more!!!
Tears of happiness fell through her eyes
Tears as regal and precious as river Nile
Along with her, I too cried but with pride
for I am her song and she - the rhythm of my life
Love
Tinka
"Which completely invigorated her heart
Then I tickled her essence with my love
and swiftly she discerned our love for us"
Fantastic!!!
for I am her song and she -
the rhythm of my life
These verses are a killer....its a beautiful poem!!!
~Shezz
"I appeased her fear and calmed her down
Then pressed her with humble embrace
And told her that our true love for us
Like the soul would never crumble "
THIS IS LOVEA {{and you capture it so well every word.}}}}
Hugs n luck my friend bravo Peggy
ty
tony
William
~E
And told her that our true love for us
Like the soul would never crumble
Beautiful,
Reindeer