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If I were a God, What would I do?
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“Heat cannot be alienated from the Sun
nor can love from the lovers’ heart”
- Bhuwan Thapaliya

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If I were a God,
What would I do?
I'd make you immortal,
oh! My dearest love
And be always with you
Together and forever
In the warm corridor
Of your loves clutch
Singing the loves tune
From dusk till dawn
Along the divine hue
Of lovers pretty truce

If I were immortal
and you a mortal
what would I do?
I'd pray to the God
And beg him to
Make me mortal too
For I'd not wanted to
Be immortal sans you
But rather
I'd wanted to be mortal
And perish along with you

Though the life is long
it certainly would end
but though the love is short
it would never end
if you were not to love me
what would I do?
I'd changed your heart;
With Juliet's heart
And make you
Forever love me
Perpetually beneath the
Domicile of Gods


Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya


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 Reviews of "If I were a God, What would I do?"
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2003
Oh, you warm my heart and my soul and even my poor lil' ole' mind!

Love,

Richard Vallance


... with Juliet's heart, even in the face of certain death!

And Death shall have no dominion....

Richard,
your brother's soul




Reviewed by Shezray Faisal
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
I absolutly ...totally love this poem. You seem to be brimming with emotions and talent to express it. Bravo!
~Shezz

Reviewed on March 17, 2003
This was quite wonderful! I just love your poetry!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
good lord... this is very very beautiful... i love it from the beginning to the end...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Delightful to read and well done.
~E

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Such beauty and love. Well done, Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Tanya Roberts SimplyTan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
What a wonderful heartfelt write. Enjoyed

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
A lovely yearning to join heart and souls, well done Bhuwan!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Absolutely an excellent write, full of pure love and want.

William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Excellent write straight from the heart
Love
tinka

Reviewed on March 17, 2003
lovely write, bhuwan! thanks so much for your sweet review regarding my prose; it was really appreciated, and it was much needed! thanks ever so much! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) to you, bhuwan, and god bless your country and your people!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Beautiful as always Bhuwan...love the angels..Floria

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Wonderful romantic write Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Excellent, heartfelt romance.

Nancy

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Heartfelt romance. This is beautiful.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
A beautiful poem!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Thought provoking.. mystical magical write. Love it!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2003
A very romantic write from the heart.

Reviewed on March 17, 2003
Excellent write. Enjoyed.


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