Why Aren't We Independent ? (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 26, 2003

Truly spoken. But some people are very selfish.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

thought provoking write! well done, and well expressed, bhuwan! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Excellent my friend
as usual wonderful words of wisdom

William....peace & love

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Whoa this is heavy... why indeed?

"We depend on others
For the continuation
Of our survival"

This is SO true..
There's still hope for the future, who knows...

--Karissa

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Bhuwan this is deeper than appears..great messages in this one...we must get along with each other..."we look for company, when we are alone" yes it does get lonely..floria

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

This was so wonderful, these words:

An independent beings
We are,
An interdependent beings
And we exist
Not only for us
But for the
Other person too
Those known
And unknown to us
Binded by the ties
Of love and labor

A Truth, that can not be denied.

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

very true no matter how much we think we are independent we are not awesome points made in this one great job on this fantastic poem

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

So much wisdom in your work.A thought provoking piece, Bhuwan.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

How true, I depend on someone to wash his hands after he uses the bathroom and before he makes my taco, he holds my good health in his hands. You are a wise man.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Bhuwan my friend, there so very much insight built into the startling poem. It took me a while to digest it. Well written as always. Bill

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Bhuwan, your perception is wonderful! I enjoy your works.

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

how true... always making the best sense of all sensibilities...

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Hey Bhuwan, You ask some profound questions in this fine write.

yf
tony