Heart Is Made Of Iron (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 17, 2004

Dear Poet, this is exactly true. Love takes work and constant care just as a delicate flower needs attention. Well put! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Ha..I loved that, wise words..

Reindeer

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Great poem !

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Hi Bhuwan,
Also, some hearts
are made of ice...
Just thought i would
throw that in...lol

Great write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

mine is made of chocolate!!
every one eats my heart out tonight!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Very wise!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Strange comparison, but a good poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

wisdom and truth, excellent Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Bhuwan what a cleverly done and very truthful insightful lil gem this is...SUPERB!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Clever write Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Nice metaphor, Bhuwan! :)

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Excellent thoughts!!!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Yep... Polish it.. be it iron, crystal, paper, or wood.. or it willeventually crumble.. Great write!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Hi Bhuwan, I do not know about iron, I have met some of hearts made of stone. Good write!

tony

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Bhuwan,
you are an angel of healing..Thank you spirit of light for your energy of love..!!!! KEEP SHINING FOR US ALL!!!!!

Dove

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Interesting design for the heart. Wise thought shared.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Bhuwan,
Oh this Poet is excellent!!!!
"Heart is made of iron
And not of diamond
So, polish it frequently
With the grease of love
Otherwise it would be
Crumbled by the rust "
So much truth in this fragile one...
As love is it needs the love and nourishment
a wise poet you are clapping and so proud of you
my friend....
Love n Luck Peg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Bhuwan, excellent thought. Love the fragility of this.