I Saw God (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

This is beautiful, excellent.
S

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

God is Love and Love is God, and Bhuwan what you did was make love offerings every time you helped another. And God approves of you and what you do. Keep up the writing and leading. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Bhuwan this is the MOST ELEGANT AND GORGEOUS INSPIRATIONAL WRITE I HAVE YET READ!!!! You are a true light here in this sometimes stale and stagnated humanity we all call life!
Love, Light and Peace
~Nikki~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Bhuwan, and they saw God when they looked into your eyes, you are a beautiful man with a lively spirit!A magnificent write!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

A very inspiring poem very beautiful indeed. ~Z~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Outstanding write, this is so beautiful Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Greatly presented !!!!

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Wonderful, humbling and inspiring! Thank you, Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Very beautifully done, Bhuwan.You are an inspiration.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Nicely done.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

When I ignited the spirit of compassion
In the consciousness of the humankind
I saw God in their neutrality
As they annihilated the domicile of disparity

When I estranged the egoism from me
And dedicated my life to serve the humanity
I saw God in my revelation
As I realized the necessity of the global unity

INSPIRATIONAL!! I WILL LOOK CLOSER TODAY..

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

I love how this builds, Bhuwan...excellent!
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

A powerful and true message Bhuwan ... great work!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Keep up the beautiful work you've been doing and continue shining as you always do Bhuwan. You are a great person.

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Bhuwan,
I love the way you handled that comment...

In my opinion
you are 'a saint'
not for this poem or what's in it
but for being so fantastic in the face of sarcasim,mate,I take my hat off to you,I really need to be more like you.
I adored your fantastic poem and I just love who and what you are namely,one great guy.
Best wishes always
from
kay

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

A very uplifting spiritual write!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Hello Tyler....I am grateful to you for helping me out...so sweet of you....I really appreciate your help...god we with you.....thank u my friend....BHUWAN

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

when i read this poem i saw the spirit of god emanate within its words...

Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Good consistency of subject, fine deeds sought. I would have titled it "The saint," personally. One minor quirk. Proper grammatical form would require that you change every second "when" to as.

Thanks for your care to my poems in the past, I do apologise for taking so long to respond, but am just now overcoming some despondency which had left me literarily crippled. Regards to you.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Yes Bhuwan.....believe Me I saw God throught your eyes reading this beauty!!!

You shine my man...and God knows that!!!

Shine ON!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

Wonderful poem. :-)

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on July 6, 2003

This is most excellent...very insightful and thought provoking!!
I truly love the art work also!!
Dee