Paradox Of Memory (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Forgive me, Buwan, for stating the obvious.

The IMAGERY in this poem is both astute and lovely; so is the picture.

But you should try and get the poem's rhythms to match (they're a bit bumpy...)

I sense the lines are too long.

Perhaps recasting the poem in a few more lines, but each as a tetrameter might help.

Just a suggestion.

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on July 9, 2003

Try making new good memories helping you forget any that haunt you. Excellent write!Love N Luck....

*Marlene*

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

very meaningful and wise write...

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

Excellent write, with words of wisdom.

Nancy

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

Bravo Bhuwan! Excellent write and picture! ~Z~

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

Bhuwan...short but deep and expressive. Memories returning over an over again. Dealing with them isn't easy is it? Your Friend Bill

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

Bhuwan once again such EXCELLANT TRUTH and WISDOM...EXPERTISELY WRITTEN!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

Excellent piece, Bhuwan
~Chrissie

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

So true Bhuwan. Wise words.
All we can do is make sure we got enough good memories to "haunt" us.
Love
S

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

Hi Bhuwan,
Oh this is just "AWESOME"

Excellent write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

Oh!! And some of those memories can be so good....and some very sad!!
This brought back some real heartfelt memories to me!!

Lovely thoughful write Bhuwan!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

Bhuwan, how true, so true, and they come back impromptu.... love this...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

Beautiful and Wise words, excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

A very truthful write. Beautiful!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

A wonderful write my friend
excellent

William