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Before My Eyes
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Before my eyes,
A ghastly vision appears
Eternal anarchy of endless wars
Of Earth, Nature, and Heaven
Against the mankind
And his cavernous pride
For hidden in the chasm
Of his own light
Lit by the uncertain ray
Of fragile mind
Half lost, like in a trance
But with an erect pride
And gentle penetration
As glowing iron with fire
Over the dark abyss
Stands this modern man
With ruin upon ruin,
But still flying
In an illusionary dream,
Couched with revenge
And inflamed with
Momentary eminence
That springs upward,
Like the pyramid of fire
But descends suddenly
Like the faint breathe
Of an avaricious death


Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya




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 Reviews of "Before My Eyes"
Reviewed by Hiren Shah
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
This reminds me of my poem on applied spirituality "Legacy of September'11". Modern man has nothing to speak about.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Amazing write my friend...ty, Dani

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Fantastic write!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Bravo! Bhuwan, a deep powerful write of conditions that demand choices, and we best know what they are,and make the right ones or we will fall!

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Bhuwan, this is beautiful.
Enjoyed it very much.
S

Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Bhuwan, what a powerful write! I hear a strong message in this... excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
I feel the sadness here and hope it will never come to this.

~Joseph

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
A very profound write!
LM

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Deep and thought provoking, compelling write, Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Tarek Hassan
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
digs from a deep deep well of consciousness and knowledge, my admiration and appreciation.

Tarek Ali Hassan

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Bhuwan,

I am with Vesna on this one....
You are a soul that has been endowed with the heart for humanity and you show us the
reflections of the pain.....
Excellent profound piece. Bhuwan.....
Poet Bravo love n luck
PJ

Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Wonderful words. Totally awesome! You have managed to capture the readers' minds and take them with you into the journey of your words. Fantastic indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
You observe well my friend..you are conscious of the human condition..I thank you for conveying to us all that IS as it is. My soul cries in anguish as I see the darkness..a ray of hope is still remains..perhaps the child within will permeate the whole being thereby giving birth to joy and innocence...? 'Unless you become as little children ye shall not enter the kingdom of Heaven?'..will we take heed?

Excellent write

Vesna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Excellent write Bhuwan!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by David Knight
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Superb imagery.

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Outstanding, I enjoyed every word.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Bhuwan, very well written. We must fly until we can soar. Well done.


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