A true friend is one
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Who adorns you
More than you do
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Who revives you
More than you do
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Who knows you
More than you do
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Who motivates you
More than you do
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Who forgives you
More than you do
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Who respects you
More than you do
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Who mollifies you
More than you do
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And, who loves you
More than you do
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviewed by Priya Gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2007
you r very lucky to have a true friend that motivates u very well.
Nice One,Sir.
This is a wonderful poem that warms the heart and emphasises the rarity and value of true friendship.A bright red rose in the desert of human relations. I salute you my poet friend.
My God richly bless you as you bless others with your writing !!
Larry Matthews
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
Yes, you are so right about this.
Such true friends are rare. Once you have found one, treasure this friendship.
Nico
Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2003
Bhuwan, Have you read my "A Fair Weather Friend"? It's the opposite of your "A True Friend". What you wrote is so true.
One who will hurt with your pain more than you do, and will rejoice upon your glory more than you do. As of many other true sentiments, you have captured the essence of Friendship... the most rare treasure the being can be blessed with... in perfection and amazing beauty, Bhuwan.
~Alexandra~
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Nice One,Sir.
My God richly bless you as you bless others with your writing !!
Larry Matthews
Such true friends are rare. Once you have found one, treasure this friendship.
Nico
find one you're a very rich person!
Great write my friend!
~Chrissie
Reindeer
~Alexandra~
From one True friend to another.....Thank You!!
This write says it all!!
Love Tinka
AS ALWAYS
WILLIAM
When you need help..
Enjoyed immensely..........
Tami
excellent write