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This So Called Life ( Revised )
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Alone, in this dreadful voyage of life
Reaping immortal fruits of pain and strife
In the mystical soggy nights, from time to time
Swept with confused struggle and flight,
Where innocent soul dies every night
Do you think the story of my life is right?
Alas! My life, rugged and uneven,
As is the smile upon my countenance
That has no slight or trivial influence
Of elevated thoughts; a sense sublime
With lofty outlooks, that burns like the fire
And leaves footprint on the sands of time
My dreams, an edifice, too large to fill
Alpha and Omega of all things
And so endless is the memory I retain,
Of infinite sorrow and eternal drain
Covering the Earth with hate and pain
Praising the strong but pulverizing the lean
My life, a prison within prison, shut up
from outside light, inseparably dark
Or false glitter, that so suddenly blazes,
And conduits the dark abyss of my soul, but
Towards the mouth of infernal hell
For me, life is only an illusionary peregrination
And an eternal odyssey in this microcosm,
That immolates our soul to reach its destination
Life, an insatiable traitor, slaughters its own creator
As if its resolution is to bring sinister
My life, a mere abstruse, showy but of little value;
So called emblem of challenge, is supple
Like the subterranean passage, dead leaf fell,
There did it rest, the way to my dusty death.


Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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 Reviews of "This So Called Life ( Revised )"
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2003
Look at all the people. This den is crowded because of your talent.

Reviewed on October 10, 2003
A well penned, profound write. Enjoyed this very much!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on October 10, 2003
I see your going through something right now, hope it dosent get you down too much. I agree with Bill your expression brings out alot of emotions built up, and some that are being pondered a great deal.
Great write my friend, Your writes are REAL.
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Bravo Bravo....I love to read from you always....I'm glad to get a chance to drop in your den. Missed ya.

Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Your wisdom leaves more than footprints in the sand of time, my friend... it seeps like pure water, drop by sparkling drop, penetrating even the hardest of rocks. Thank you for this powerful, marvelous piece of your infinite talent, Bhuwan.
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by N. P. (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
yes insightful indeed, written in a feat of authentic poetic skills this is definitely a rewarding poem.

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
an outstanding write..Floreann

Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Amazing... I enjoyed this very much!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Excellent write my friend
a keeper for sure
as all your wonderful penned writes

William

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Bhuwan, your words have a magic life of their own. They takes live forms as I read and digest them. You showed brillance in this poem.
It flies in all directions; spreading emotions to all part of my soul. One day the world will recognize your work. Your friend Bill

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Excellent expression, Bhuwan. I think that if we are human, we have all been there from time to time.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Beautifully written and profound, Bhuwan
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Powerful thoughts penned here Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
This is a winner in every way Bhuwan! Your poetry is always meaningful and beautiful!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Powerful write!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
There is so much power in your thoughts; every word an edification to my soul. Excellent!

Reviewed on October 9, 2003
This was outstanding! I loved this so much, very deep and moving,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Cino
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Awesome write. The imagery is outstanding painting a vivid picture in my mind. Your words touched my heart...Karen

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
So well said...Profound work!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Bhuwan...this is one of your best..profound writing..I am feeling much like this today...your poem really touched my heart...Bravo to you...Floria

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Guess we are all just leaves on the tree of life and death is just
....falling.
'This so called life' is indeed a beautiful poem.

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
I for one certainly couldn't have said it better myself. This paints a very vivid picture!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
Wow, Bhuwan you leave me speechless most of the time when I read your writes. You fill them with such vivid images and thought provoking lines that it takes me a bit to digest them. Another great write. Lisa

Reviewed on October 9, 2003
"Life an insatiable traitor slaughters its' creator", incredibly profound ..truth bursting forth as we on the sidelines watch and record. Excellent write Bhuwan. Awesome.


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