Make Love To Me (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

I'm still blushing! Beautifully written.
Many Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Wonderful write.
Excellent
Nico

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 21, 2003

yes, a very beautiful and romantic poem...

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on October 21, 2003

beautiful..Floreann

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

So very beautiful, Bhuwan... as always..
Jenni

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Oh, Buwan!

So, so, so lovely!

I always adore your poetry!

Bye for now,

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Beautifully written as always.

Nancy

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Nice write Bhuwan! Very impressive... I enjoy the way you use your words... Congrats on a winner...

Reviewed by Tarek Hassan

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Bhuwan my friend,

Tender, gentle, loving. Flows like a dream and reflects your rich creative resources.

Tarek

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

One of your very best, so thoughtful and sensual. I love this one Bhuwan, under the stars is always best!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Now this is what I call erotic, Bhuwan in a very classy write!!!;-)
Really creative play on words!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

This should give the deities something to think on.

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Whew !!!!!! still fanning the flames of the fluttering heart. Such imagery. Seduction your name is Bhu...Excellent write.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Wow...Bhuwan...How can any red blooded woman resist this...such a lovely and tenderly written poem...loved it....floria

Reviewed by N. P. (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

wow, great write, I especially liked the existential flow of your thoughts that ended with a great last line.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Bhuwan, your words are always so intricately chosen and put together... a lucky lady she be.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Tender and so sensual, beautiful work, Bhuwan! ~Z~

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

When I can catch my breath ... absolutely breathtaking!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

A gem of a write! Loved the essense of this one.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Yikes! This t-t-touched every fiber of my being - I think. (Did I just stutter?) This delight is incredibly passionate and emotionally stirring. Yowsa!

I feel a poem coming on... Thanks for stirring me up this morning, Bhuwan!
Tami

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Wonderful love poetry, full of beautiful
expression and passion!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Very "MoViNg" :p "HeAvEnLy" invitation BhUwAn!!

Let the mood and the bloodpressure GoEs... Up-Up-Up!!

:))))...nice thought okay!!!!!!!!!!

~~~^^^~~^^^^^~^^~~~~~~~~~~^^^^?~~~~~~~Heartfailure~~~~~>poing

Lovely okay.... TiNkA...is still breathing...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Awesome, Bhuwan. Bravo!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Marvelous poem.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Bhuwan,
This is simply a natural heavenly delight!!!!
Beautiful and provocative but in such a different and unique way, and I love the imagery!
Brilliant Work!
Love, Luck, Light and Peace
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Brilliant work Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

Tempt me not LOL. Oh so so , never mind.

xxxx Ch'erie

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

Oh this is ravishing.
"Carry me to the garden, not with your
Arms but with your heart, fondle me
Not with your lips but with your soul
Undress me not, but peel me naked, and
Make love to me, beneath the lusty sky
In the full moon night, under the silhouette"
Beautiful seductuin of love.
Taylor