Existence (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kwame Mutulu (Reader)

Reviewed on July 12, 2007

Wisdom realising emptiness.. great write.

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Thought provoking ... profoundly put! Thank you for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Your mind is a treasure..

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Wise words, beautiful work!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Your words are so true! Existence only exists when witnessed by another. Without another, one cannot exist.

In another word, we all need each other in order to exist.

What wonderful write this is! I applaud this!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

:) You know I love this, Bhuwan!!! You breath so elegantly that which I struggle with! So many circles entwined...no wonder it takes Eternity to hold them all! A beauty, my friend. :)

Reviewed by Tarek Hassan

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Bhuwan friend,

Your writing is so blessed by wisdom, peace and non-violence. Your loving soul is always opening the path for some sort of gentle salvation and enlightenment. I frequently find myself and my writings embroiled in volence and drama in an attempt to understand, resolve and reach out for your sublime rarefied world of all embracing peace. I hope we complement each other

Tarek

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Deeply profound, my friend! I know that I exist for a purpose but am yet searching for what that is.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Nothing exists for itself.
Everything exists for a purpose.
Wise and profound words.
And another beautiful poem.
Nico

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Bhuwan, You are always on target, your mind is blessed along with your spirit to reveal the beauty of existence...

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Almost sounds like a doctoral thesis.
Your writing is always deeper in its insights!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Bhuwan, I love your mind! Your perception and wisdom is one that is of the old ones.... and how well you pen... excellent.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Very excellent perceptions in verses.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Profound thoughts expressed here Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Yes we are here for a purpose
as is everything...
Enjoyed......

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

The picture is a great choice! And Your essence will forever be in our thoughts. Never to be forgotten.)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

the essence of you spiritual logic is indeed profound!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Bhuwan...that last verse says it all...excellent write my friend..and I love the art..floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Profound thoughts expressed!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Yes, indeed! A superb write.

Carmen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Extremely profound, Bhuwan. Well done!

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

"Neither can existence
Be disunited
From the essence
Nor can
Essence be
Disunited from the existence "... the truth and depth of this, my dear, profound friend and marvelous poet, hit home with an intensity difficult to discribe. Yes... yes... separate essence from existence... and there is no existence anymore.
Blessings and Essential Harmony
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Excellent! Nothing but The truth!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Excellent, profound write.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Profound, ideed. (My brain's in high gear...) Thanks for sharing.

Tami

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Beautifully written Bhuwan, as always!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Bhuwan,
So profound, laced with wisdom. A wonderful piece
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Ah such very profound and indeed TRUE philosophy from the MIND of the Pan-Philosopher!

Wonderful poem, Buwan!

Please submit this to me for publication in the Winter 2004 issue of Poetry in Emotion (an international issue). I need at least 1 of your poems, as I wish to get as many lands in as possible. And Nepal (pardon the pun!) is so cool!

I shall read more poems in the near future, and select another couple or so for consideration.

But THIS one really hits home!

It seems you and I and Percy Bysshe Shelley and Plato and Buddha are one something of the same sort of wavelengths, I guess.

Have you read my sonnet, VERMILIONS?

You would love it, Friend!

Bye for now,

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Your depth of love and existence is so soul stirring. You always have this process that is so fine tuned. I enjoyed reading this. I liked the thoughts afterward.

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Your poems express the songs of your heart and mind. Wonderful, as usual, Bhuwan, well done!

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Thought provoking poem of twist so well written.