Mother Of All The Truths (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 25, 2004

Beautiful Bhuwan...short, deep - volumes in so few words.

Reviewed on November 27, 2003

Concise and truthful, Bhuwan... I like it as it is.... you could also try exploring the same subject in various different ways, with and without rhyme, maybe even one version as a haiku. A profound write...

Sara.

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on November 25, 2003

Excellent Bhuwan as usual. What I hate about this piece is I didn't write it. < < < < < < <HUGS>>>>>> I share this vision so completely. Mikii

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Short but very powerful and replete with wisdom of truth. Thank you, Bhuwan. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Sometimes, more is less. This one is just right. Good work.

Carmen

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

haha, this piece reads like an equation. very nice, wisdom drop, poet.

Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

That is a great poem, it does cause one to ponder a question, do you think he might have been getting a bit annoyed when he made the last few, or was the mold just getting a little worn.
A good poems always makes one think.
Mor

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Perfection in thought!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Wisdom, strength, soul and heart.......you have tem all......along with much talent.....Always wonderful....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

AMEN to this Bhuwan..this is truth...loved it..floria

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Excellent words and wisdom, Bhuwan - as always!

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Bhuman: You rock my whole world with your profound wisdom, and at such a young age! You've hit the nail right on the head with this one. God is not the one who created all the division, different demoninations, and different religions. It was man. God wants us to all get along and to agree to disagree and respect each other's opinions. The greatest wars and crimes in history were perpetrated in the name of God and religion. Thanks so much for sharing this. By the way, you've been missed the past few days. Susan Sparks

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Yes we are all god-made for friendship with him, not for man's religion, this one rocks Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Oh, would that your words were true, Bhuwan, but alas, I fear that is not the case. Mankind is, if truth be known, is as dissimilar as water is to sand. But like the water which laps at the sandy beach we have to keep striving for oneness, otherwise I fear that war and rumors of wars will never cease to plague us. You wrote a beautiful, wishful poem, here is hoping that it is prophesy.

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Great truth that eluded many for centuries, that all religion are man made, but when Christ came down from heaven to save man, that is no religion, that is love though we caption it chtistianity.

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

I believe in this, yes... Whatever the Name, or no Name at all and just an undeniable truth felt within every atom of Being... there is One Energy. And it creates, destroys, renews from destruction, is Light and Dark, is Chaos and Genesis... is Absolute. Superb, Bhuwan.
Blessings,
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Excellent
Such simple truth ..

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

superb poetry!

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

Bhuwan, Powerful and soooo True! Great write.
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 24, 2003

You've hit the nail on the head
I'm not sure about some of this man
made stuff......

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

EXCELLENT MY FRIEND EXCELLENT
AS ALWAYS

wILLIAM

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Well said. Now all we need to do is get the war mongers to take heed

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Ah, my Bhuwan, a man of few words yet profoundly true they are! AMEN and well said: religions are nothing, God is everything. AMEN! Amen! amen! We all are one blood, one humanity, brothers and sisters ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Amen to this one Bhuwan!!

Truth never been said better!!

Hand in hand we walk as one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

You are very TALENTED, bhuwan!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 23, 2003

Bhuwan your wisdom shines forth in this gem...so glad to read you;-)All the best with everything...