It is neither
The length
Nor the depth
Of life
That matters
The thing
That really matters
Is the depth of love
In our life
And the length of life
In our love
Because,
In the end
We will remember
Neither the
Pains of love
Not the despair of life
But the
Memories of love
And the
Supremacy of the God
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2003
EXCELLENT!!!!!!! write my friend.....
Debashish From India
Indeed the only thing that matters, dear friend, as it is the ultimate purpose and sense of Life itself. It is always a pleasure and a blessing to read you.
Love and Light,
~Alexandra~
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Bhuwan: This is excellent and so wise. Thanks for sharing.
Susan Sparks
This is such a beautiful piece may the joy you receive be a hundred times that which you give to us in written inspiration.
Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2003
Thank you for sharing these heartfelt words of wisdom and I am so thankful for the way you generously give reviews and words of encouragement to all of us here at the den.Somehow your friends can feel your sincerity and feel your happiness when we are happy and in love you seem to cheer us on.May you always be blessed with love in your world.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2003
This is absolutely beautiful! You keep taking my breath away which makes it hard for me to come with anything better to say!
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Debashish From India
Love and Light,
~Alexandra~
Susan Sparks
Carmen
Is the depth of love
YES!! Indeed Bhuwan..that and naught else..for when that IS all else is added!! ty
Vesna :)
You are the master of hearts and love!!
Smiles....real angel in my eyes!!
Love Tinka
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
That really matters
Is the depth of love
In our life
And the length of life
In our love
Awesome words, Bhuwan!
Michael
Blessings,
Libby