I am not
in you
You are
not in me
We are
as diverse
as the stars
in the sky
We are
not us
We are
total strangers
You live
in the color
of the rainbow
and wear
the linings
of the cloud
whereas, I live
in the silhouette
of the tyranny
and wear
the costume
of disparity
You sleep
in the crescent bed
of the moon
and drink
the pristine
morning dew
whereas, I sleep
in the circular
bed of the adversity
and drink
my own sweat
in the severe heat of the noon
You play
with the
Saturn’s ring
and caress
the countenance
of the sun
whereas, I play
hide and seek
with the death
and caress
the wounded hub
of my dreams
You breathe
the divine
zephyr
and think
like the cadence
of the heaven
whereas, I breathe
the twister
of belligerence
and think
like the
stagnant pond
You shine
like the moon
in the full moon night
and fly
like the free bird
in the itinerary of the sky
whereas, I am
shrouded by the
miseries of life
and soar to fall again
like the ashes
into the air
You bequest
fragrance
to the rose
and perpetual
persistence
to the river
whereas, I steal
the fragrance
from the rose
and curse
the river
for drowning my hope
This is beautiful in its meaning and imagery. It is thought-provoking and powerful in expression. Thank you for this offering, Bhuwan. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
100% pure brilliance. You are a true master my friend. Bravo!
This poetry is magical!
One of the best poems I've read for a good while!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Great write on opposites and their connection :-)
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
This is undoubtedly one of the most profoundly
beautiful pieces I have read on Authors Den.
What a comparison of two personalities!
This goes in my library.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Excellent work Bhuwan
me thinks, you love the rose flower?
Yes, diverse as the stars. But one glowing in the dark does not make it less of a star than the one which gives birth to dawn. Without twilight, there would be no sunrise. This is a masterful philosophical essay in free verse, my dear friend.
Blessings*Love*Dreams
~Alexandra~
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Amazing Bhuwan!
I read your poems hungrily because I know that there will always be a morsel of truth to savour with great delight and more often there is a banquet!
Another new departure from your rich, powerful and endowed being. You certainly shake stagnant socio-political and philosophical waters and take us to the realm of greek drama and mythology. Carry on my friend, many many people everywhere need to hear you. Your images are staggeringly powerful and expressive, how do you create them?
It seems you speak of God in comparison to mankind. If so, you spoke it exceedingly well, Bhuwan: only forgetting to mention His invitation to join His perfect realm. And, if not of God, still you created another masterpiece... as usual. ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
This is BRILLIANT work, Bhuwan..A winner my friend!
excellent imagery in this inspiring conceptual poem ...
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
{{{BHUWAN}}}
"
You bequest
fragrance
to the rose
and perpetual
persistence
to the river
whereas, I steal
the fragrance
from the rose
and curse
the river
for drowning my hope"
Poet this is so excellent all of this one so much wisdome and contradiction in both the souls lives...
Powerful very excellent.
HUGS and Love thank you for this Gem My collection now.
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Reindeer
(thank you for your concern;-)
Michael
May 2004 be an especially rewarding year for you!
Gina
Amor
:)Sandy
Excellent!!!
Taylor
One of the best poems I've read for a good while!
beautiful pieces I have read on Authors Den.
What a comparison of two personalities!
This goes in my library.
me thinks, you love the rose flower?
Weeeeeeeeeeeee!!
Love Tinka
Blessings*Love*Dreams
~Alexandra~
I read your poems hungrily because I know that there will always be a morsel of truth to savour with great delight and more often there is a banquet!
Thank you!
Another new departure from your rich, powerful and endowed being. You certainly shake stagnant socio-political and philosophical waters and take us to the realm of greek drama and mythology. Carry on my friend, many many people everywhere need to hear you. Your images are staggeringly powerful and expressive, how do you create them?
Good cheer and creative times
Tarek
jessica
aka
gypsie
"
You bequest
fragrance
to the rose
and perpetual
persistence
to the river
whereas, I steal
the fragrance
from the rose
and curse
the river
for drowning my hope"
Poet this is so excellent all of this one so much wisdome and contradiction in both the souls lives...
Powerful very excellent.
HUGS and Love thank you for this Gem My collection now.
Peg