I have a horizontal dream more vertical than the Everest's peak (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ANTHONY KARIUKI (Reader)

Reviewed on March 19, 2004

This is wonderful of you.My INSPIRATION in deed.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 11, 2004

Deeply thought-provoking, Bhuwan. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on January 11, 2004

This was so profound. It was indeed a pleasure to read.

Evelyn.

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on January 11, 2004

Within every Winter resides the Seed of a new Spring... within every cloak of Darkness is the pure nudity of newborn Light. Within your magnificent Spirit dwell infinite beauty, wisdom, hope and love, dearest friend...
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

This was outstanding, the best I have ever read, beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

This is a masterpiece!

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

Such a powerful write Bhuwan.

Nancy

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

Truly powerful Bhuwan!

"Yet, I�m not in a hurry to die
and explore the life beyond
the boundaries of demise
I crave to live more and explore
the life within the borders of life
for I have a horizontal dream
more vertical than the Everest�s peak"

Straight from your radiant pen!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

Hi Bhuwan,
Bravo!!!!!
Yet another fantastic
write by you my friend....

Hugs
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

a powerful write, teeming with profundity

great work, Bhuwan

peace

Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

great content!

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

Excellent, Bhuwan: no surprise there! As Jude said, this life is a journey to either surviving death or entering it totally. It is our choice. For myself, I feel much as Apostle Paul: I long to be with the Lord yet must remain here until my mission is complete. Much love to your heart from mine. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

An excellent piece, Bhuwan!
One of my favorite 'motivators' is a line
from the movie "The Hours," where the character
Laura Brown says: "I chose life."
You have much talent, my poet peer. Keep the
positive aspects glowing!

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

wow

there are those of us that rhyme and those of YOU that write verse and poetry

*awe*
jessica
aka
gypsie

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

Powerful and very profound. Excellent, Bhuwan.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

An excellently worded piece my friend
with profound and wonderful meanings

William

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

And you keep climbing that dream, dear poet. You just keep on climbing. Read your work on Poetry and Emotions -- I was so proud to say I read you every day. I was so filled we pride, and cried, at the beauty of your words.

Carmen

Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

oh yes Bhuwan..thoughts I have reminded myself of this day '
The struggle between
the desire of my heart
and the reality
of my subsistence
diminishes the radiance
Of my countenance
And, the triangular
conflict between
my objective heart
my subjective mind
and my absolute soul
makes me a living cadaver '
indeed it is a struggle at times,yet what would life be without..I am thankful for these struggles for life is worth all endeavours

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

Life is where it's at!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

This is a very awesome write, a great dipiction of the personal struggle we all face from time to time.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

Excellent as always my dear friend! ~Z~

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

How you do this I do not know. Another wonderfull work in a long line of brilliant work.

Michael

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

Up, up, we grasp, ever upward, chasing our dreams. Thanks, Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 9, 2004

Very powerful poem Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2004

POWERFUL poem...That title explains it all..GREAT work, my friend!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 9, 2004

Oh yes, we all have our Everest Bhuwan! I think you'll be spreading your wisdom for a long time to come;-)Superb write!

I think we all crave the hereafter, but don't want to die to get there;-)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 9, 2004

life is a preparation for surviving death, exploring the axis of eternal love ...

excellent end to this powerful poem!