It's a lonely life
but my comely love for you holds me.
It's a voyage of rebirth,
of our love trying to break free.
But I vow to find my love,
somewhere on this lonely road
and revive once again
the life lived together long ago.
I'm trying to find my way
back to that lustrous past,
where the cadence of love
used to steer our heart
as the pristine dawn
and our joy meant the world to us.
I pray that I find it
and I pray to be with you yet again.
Our love will always bloom
like the rose for us
in the garden
of our fecund heart.
Yet ,we should be alert
cause one ripple in the heart
can cause thousand more
ripples from that first one.
Now, we are only gnarled
with sadness and murky pain.
Omnipotent remorse
for what we did to each other
but those mellifluous memories
will never perish from our mind
deep inside our heart,
it will prevail forever and ever.
The search for the lost love
has been a long, lengthy one
but I will find it
and lead it back through the path of love
to the place not so far-off,
a place not nameless
to the place I remember,
a place I call " Heart".
Such loving words!!! First love? Hmmm!!! Some of us are gray, Bhwan, and so that is far behind...and yet, as you have insinuated, perhaps not so far? Excellent write...excellent expresion of love and humanity...bright blessings to you and yours...
Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Brilliantly done once again. You are a master of verse.
Our love will always bloom
like the rose for us
in the garden
of our fecund heart.
Yet ,we should be alert
cause one ripple in the heart
can cause thousand more
ripples from that first one.
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, abstract but all comes into focus at the end.
Available females should be swooning on your doorstop by now,
this is truly romantic!
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Bhuwan...that place called "heart" is indeed a wonderful place,
and the holy grail of poets.
You have expressed your thoughts beautifully here, and I thoroughly
enjoyed reading this.
The search can feel endless and, at times, so tiring... I commiserate. When you find her, she will find that your heart is that of gold. Such a tender write, Bhuwan.
Bhuwan, this is up to your usual standards of excellent writing: a moving, heartfelt piece depicting the ups and downs of relationships. Weathering the storms is not always easy, yet love will prevail. Well done! ~~BonnieQ
"Now, we are only gnarled
with sadness and murky pain.
Omnipotent remorse
for what we did to each other
but those mellifluous memories
will never perish from our mind
deep inside our heart,
it will prevail forever and ever."
Bhuwan this poem touched me so deeply, especially
this verse. It is so beautiful and bittersweet.
I hope you find it soon, you deserve only the best!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2004
Bhuwan,
This is so tender yet so bittwersweet.
"Our love will always bloom
like the rose for us
in the garden
of our fecund heart.
Yet ,we should be alert
cause one ripple in the heart
can cause thousand more
ripples from that first one.
Now, we are only gnarled
with sadness and murky pain.
Omnipotent remorse
for what we did to each other
but those mellifluous memories
will never perish from our mind
deep inside our heart,
it will prevail forever and ever.
The search for the lost love
has been a long, lengthy one
but I will find it
and lead it back through the path of love
to the place not so far-off,
a place not nameless
to the place I remember,
a place I call " Heart". "
Bravo Poet this is beautiful Bhuwan.....
Love N Luck
Lady peg
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2004
SEARCH for love is often lengthy...GREAT romantic poem!
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like the rose for us
in the garden
of our fecund heart.
Yet ,we should be alert
cause one ripple in the heart
can cause thousand more
ripples from that first one.
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, abstract but all comes into focus at the end.
What a precious loving
write...
Bravo my friend!!!!
Trixie :)
this is truly romantic!
and the holy grail of poets.
You have expressed your thoughts beautifully here, and I thoroughly
enjoyed reading this.
Reindeer
Carmen
Love Tinka
with sadness and murky pain.
Omnipotent remorse
for what we did to each other
but those mellifluous memories
will never perish from our mind
deep inside our heart,
it will prevail forever and ever."
Bhuwan this poem touched me so deeply, especially
this verse. It is so beautiful and bittersweet.
I hope you find it soon, you deserve only the best!
This is so tender yet so bittwersweet.
"Our love will always bloom
like the rose for us
in the garden
of our fecund heart.
Yet ,we should be alert
cause one ripple in the heart
can cause thousand more
ripples from that first one.
Now, we are only gnarled
with sadness and murky pain.
Omnipotent remorse
for what we did to each other
but those mellifluous memories
will never perish from our mind
deep inside our heart,
it will prevail forever and ever.
The search for the lost love
has been a long, lengthy one
but I will find it
and lead it back through the path of love
to the place not so far-off,
a place not nameless
to the place I remember,
a place I call " Heart". "
Bravo Poet this is beautiful Bhuwan.....
Love N Luck
Lady peg