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Titanic Dreaming
by Ch'erie de Perrot → (All Poetry by Ch'erie de Perrot)
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Titanic Deaming On board the luxury unsinkable, Bearing down at increased speed, A massive Ice cube tore away the hull Mangeling it as a hot knife would slice through butter Amid the terrified shrieks, of unsuspecting Souls onboard... United in effort and expertise Nightgowns shed in haste Isolating the doomed flotilla Taking precautions in vain E.J. Rallied Women and Children of First Class Down down down, into waiting lifeboats Steerage with Souls from foreign lands Told to stay put till higher classes were lowered first Anguish untold permeated the icy cold air Turbulents of Torment for those locked neath the elevators Expectations of a New Life now torn asunder Segregation, of the Classes bore new meaning. Oh the weeping and wailing and Nashing of Teeth For those who knew they would never see their promised Land! Angry Groans of the Hull Splitting in two Meant that certain doom was inevitable Erractic Measures taken to survive met with pistol shots Righteous indignation took on a new meaning Innoculating forever the undesirables of their home grown disease Calculative, merciless, genocide upon the High Sea's As she slipped Screaming, Neath the waves of Diabolical Hypocrisy!! Ch'erie de Perrot Copyright 2008 All Rights Reserved Cal Copyright Australia Ltd The Engineer was heard to of said " Why God himself Could not Sink her" what folly, to challenge the Almighty. Man still believes in his own abilities to put right what has been torn asunder in this world, Folly! Unfathomable Folly!!

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on February 12, 2009

A well constructed poem!
Yes, nothing is unsinkable.
But with God nothing is impossible.
We need to pray for our country every day.
Amen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 23, 2009

Thank you Ch'erie for sharing. I could never imagine ever making such a statement for God is the most powerful and we have to trust in Him to lead our leaders in the right direction. Thank you for sharing Obama United States Of America.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 22, 2009

You have build a strong Acronym in this poem that is expressive and tells how you feel which as you so say is your right and your freedom to do so. Hugs to you Cherry Pie.

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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Chilling write, God help us all!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Kazza in Texas. :(

Reviewed by George Carroll

Great acrostic and full of wisdom in the depth of its sincerity.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Don't know what to say,
This dream does say alot of today,
Hopefully if it means the states are on a wayward path,
We don't spite God in anyway and incur as well His wrath...Ed

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Wow. So, what I'm seeing in these lines is America's undoing? God help us all. Vividly, terrifyingly imaged - well done, Chezza!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

It seems God has a sense of humor my friend. I couldn't even begin to tell you you about the dream I had on Tuesday night relating to the same subject you write of here. Very well done.

Reviewed by jude forese

powerfully created acrostic ...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on January 21, 2009

Unbelievable!!! Well-constructed poem!!!

Sandie Angel :o)