As Time Goes By (poem) by Nancy D. on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 20, 2003

So sad, but life does go on
We never forget our passing loved ones.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 19, 2003

so sad Nancy, this is beautiful

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on April 19, 2003

hmm, i don't have much to say but its lovely and sad.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2003

I felt the grief and pain it`s never easy to go through this .....may you heart heal
sad write but well done

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on April 17, 2003

very heart-wrenching but so beautifully expressed.

Reviewed by David Mohd

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

A beautiful poem.thank u Nancy,everytime u speaks with heart.

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Heartwrenching...beautiful.

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

Very excellent poem! Know in your heart that life goes on for ALL divine things in this Universe! Only things that serve no purpose become extinct. For people to LOVE him like that, he served a GOOD purpose. Nothing that is GOOD will ever die!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

At least his was a peaceful ending, but it doesn't lessen the sorrow. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

A very moving and loving write. Sorry for your loss.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Very touching....sigh!!!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Very heartfelt and moving, Nancy. I understand this.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Hi Nancy, Very touching. For your sadness I grieve.

tony

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

Touched my heart, so poignant and loving.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 13, 2003

This was so very sad, but so beautifully written,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 12, 2003

This is lovely...sometimes death just doens't make any sense. You have to believe in a Divine power, and the Creators plan, to get through the grief. Well done.

Question, verse 3 line 2, [Were]Should that be [We're]? I had to reread that line a couple of times, so I just wondered?

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 12, 2003

a sad poem Nacny...
Love is eternal

William

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on April 12, 2003

The love will live forever...

*Marlene*

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 12, 2003

A lovely lament, even though a sad remembrance...

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on April 12, 2003

Such a bittersweet poem Nancy. I wonder if one ever gets over the goodbyes...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on April 12, 2003

Oh, Nancy, I'm so sorry...you've moved me with your lament.