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Demon Love
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Demon Love

 

Loud off-beat radical rhythms of pain

Tearing at my heart like a scourge drawing blood

from a slave.

Bridal bed empty of the love it once produced

Ceiling spins delirious patterns turn green

 

Ripped from my chest, she licked my heart clean

Hiding behind Hitler’s ghost on the train

As Wiesel tells of little boys dying in hope-filled

Terror of the small intense world she lives in.

 

Love not touching the edge of the knife

For fear of the pain at the depth of the soul

And the flow of hate behind glassed over eyes

Holding off screaming demons gasping for life.

 

How can it be known, the pain from deep within

When love is snatched away like a feather in the wind

And Gump slumps wordlessly on the bench

The pain of love leads to the death of the soul.

 

She smiles as she wanders away, blood dripping

Spirits hover above in wonder of the end

Her heart beats in radical rhythms of pain

I’m just a victim of innocence and death.

 

© 2007 Dayvid Graybill


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 Reviews of "Demon Love"
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on May 1, 2010
Dayvid,
Very descriptive...you have great talent. I will be tracking you.

Blessings+
~Linda

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 30, 2010
Sublime metaphors! Your readers can so appreciate the use of this style of syntax, Dayvid. You put it there and that's where it stays...strong writing.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed on April 29, 2010
The metaphors in this are so dark and just amazing!

Reviewed on April 29, 2010
Wow! YOU write INTENSE!
GREAT POEM and Imagery Dayvid!

Blessings and Hugs, SHEEoxo

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 29, 2010
The reader can feel the pain within each line Dayvid.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on April 29, 2010
Very nicely done. Heartfelt with total imagery.


GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on April 29, 2010
The pain reaches up and off the page directly to the heart of the reader...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 29, 2010
The pain of love leads to the death of the soul.

Powerfully sad and tragic.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 29, 2010
this left me with chills...very powerful and filled with amazing imagery!!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on April 29, 2010
Great imagery and great choice of words. Your pain is well-expressed and this reader can feel your pain.

Sandie Angel :o(


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