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I Tried to Save You
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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I remember trying to save the world.

I Tried to Save You

 

I threw you a rope

but it was too short

I wanted to save your life

and I saw you reach for it

 

but you disappeared

falling through the quiet.

 

I often think of you

as I look at the clouds

floating through my mind

in the back of the woods.

 

but you disappeared

falling through to black.

 

Sometimes I want you

to smile again but sadly.

And try again to reach out

with your eyes glowing.

 

But you disappeared

without your crazy hat.

 

You disappeared

and you didn’t even look back.

 

2010 © Dayvid Graybill


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 Reviews of "I Tried to Save You"
Reviewed on May 18, 2010
many people never do look back
I am like that myself, unless it is in
remembrances I'll take a look
re-evaluating ourself is always a great place
to start the leaving of anything
it is a double bladed sword & so much more
sadly this reminds me of my sister
whom cannot be saved from meth monkies
Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 18, 2010
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 17, 2010
Saving you saving me?

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 17, 2010
sad, well written and profound

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 17, 2010
Rejection or lost love is not easy for anyone to deal with.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on May 17, 2010
Nicely written heartfelt poem.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on May 17, 2010
It is very sad, when an outreached hand, is not taken. They have to be willing. Warmth, Carin'


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