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Love's Commotion
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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Don't we soon have to change our way of thinking?
Love’s Commotion A shaft of dusted light Pouring through the hole In a door no one passes To emptiness inside Hope unnoticed slices Love-torn hardened hearts Tightly closed hands And pessimistic minds Fling wide the door! Throw out the shadows Against warm beams of sun And goose-bumps of love! © 2010 Dayvid Graybill

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Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2010

Very nice writing, Dayvid. This writing is so epressive and complete with good hope will.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 23, 2010

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on May 22, 2010

The laser light of hope does provide an opportunity. Patrick

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on May 22, 2010

WHAT A MARVELOUS POETICAL EXPRESSION OF LOVE'S ARRIVAL...I LOVED THIS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on May 22, 2010

A burst of pure radiance, Day!

Love and oiled door hinges,
Sage

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 22, 2010

i like this and the power of the last lines!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 22, 2010

Beauty in your words!
Love this
peace, love, and light

Amber

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 22, 2010

Nice descriptive write

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