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Love's Commotion
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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Don't we soon have to change our way of thinking?

Love’s Commotion

 

A shaft of dusted light

Pouring through the hole

In a door no one passes

To emptiness inside

 

Hope unnoticed slices

Love-torn hardened hearts

Tightly closed hands

And pessimistic minds

 

Fling wide the door!

Throw out the shadows

Against warm beams of sun

And goose-bumps of love!

 

© 2010 Dayvid Graybill


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 Reviews of "Love's Commotion"
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2010
Very nice writing, Dayvid. This writing is so epressive and complete with good hope will.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 23, 2010
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
The laser light of hope does provide an opportunity. Patrick

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
WHAT A MARVELOUS POETICAL EXPRESSION OF LOVE'S ARRIVAL...I LOVED THIS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
A burst of pure radiance, Day!

Love and oiled door hinges,
Sage

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
i like this and the power of the last lines!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
Beauty in your words!
Love this
peace, love, and light

Amber

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
Nice descriptive write


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