An unique blessing! Bravo David!

I 2nd Sage...
Growing inside new gardens
With pastures pew
And meadows alter
Vickie

No servant's heart? No inspiration.

You have effectively put the reader into the "mind space" your character, Dayvid. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

interesting write

When one stops believing in what he is doing..or the passion has taken a back seat...it's time to rethink yourself and move on.

You can lead the horse to water but you can't make them drink, especially if the water is suspect. Patrick

As a priest maybe he can get one of his altar boys to do the dishes...I used to do all sorts of things for the priests in our parrish...cut lawns, sweep, mop, clean, dust...etc,ed

Disillusionment in ones life or profession can happen to anyone, it's sad that it can also happen to a purveyor of God's message...

...BUT HE WAS ORDAINED TO WASH THE DISHES...POOR GUY...DISCOVERING HIMSELF IN THE WRONG PROFESSION...AFTER SO LONG...NOT BEING ABLE TO FIND THE DOOR THAT OPENS TOWARDS...THE SON. A WELL DONE, VERY SAD, WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

A great write but he needs to know it's time for him to take a break now.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

When the heart is no longer in it, it's time to change the angle of the pulpit, time to preach a new sermon that will rock the masses, Pastor! Monasteries chain of command and demoted to washing dishes isn't at all what it is, it is just an Old Stubborn Priest volunteering to cleanse The Last Supper to begin anew...scripture will always be and the sun will always be...and the angry will always be, so the Beatles said, "Let it be, speaking words of wisdom"...

Love and ecclesiastical dishpan prayerful hands,
Sage

This is inCREDible, Dayvid! I LOVE it!!!!!! The imagery is regal and the metaphors are full of mortal wisdom ~
Blessings,
Christine