The controlling image of orange juice works well with the free verse format and modernist/existentialist thematics (reminds me of the mood opening Notes From the Underground). I like the Spleen of this piece - honest and authentic. Nice work there Dayvid!

Forget about the alignment; you seem to be putting it out like it would have come out. Although, I do prefer a black russian over many things. No, really, I drink seldom; but that is one of my favorites along with the screwdrivers. I can't seem to pick up the pen when I indulge, however. On the subject, it is nice to purposely do things differently on occasion, and sometimes let things go. I dig the loose feel of this writing, Dayvid. Thanks for sharing.

Smiles, raise your glass high!! well done

hug
Kathy

Screwdriver is my favorite drink, just two of them and I can let the rest of the world go by>>>, you haven't lost your words!

Hair of the dog old friend, helps to form words but it hurts to speak them out loud. Try a bacon sandwich. Ptrick

how clever Dayvid!!
I like tequilas & orange liquors though myself
with cranberry, fresh limes & fresh oranges
oh yeah...Margaritaville!!

ah, screwdrivers making all seem better!

Sounds like a fuzzy navel instead of a fuzzy head, Pastor...maybe a trip to the pulpit and a sermon on Dirty Laundry will help...look up Don Henley and Eagles on the Internet and call it Rock and Roll!

Love and Full Hasselblads,
Sage

Dayvid, how about try OJ and Champagne. Then make a toast to a well-deserved lie in for the day and recover sans guilt, in style!
Blessings,
Christine

O.J. and Vodka sound very good to me, right now.

I don't drink much but a glass of oj and a shot of vodka sounds really good right now..Vanilla vodka would make it taste like a creamsickle.. Sounds good..
Hope things get better for you.
Peace, love and light,
Amber

OJ & Vodla can help anybody develop words, just sometimes its hard to spelll them...;-)e

Inspiration comes in odd ways and forms at times. Thanks for sharing, Dayvid. Love and peace to you,

Regis