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Eve and God
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Eve and God

 

Jobe rose up and tore his clothes

Shaved his head and crossed his eyes

Satan smiled and grinned again

Blew his nose and said good-bye.

 

God calls upon heaven’s court

Bolt of lightning split dark sky

Around the floating board room

Michael rose and gave a cry.

 

No one moved except the Snake

Wrapped around Eve’s naked breast

Apple fell upon the floor

Wind blew hard from the west.

 

God stood up and winked at Eve

She walked out the open door

Satan followed close behind

Thunder rolled from shore to shore.

 

Jobe saw Eve across the clouds

Satan moved fast from behind

Jealous Adam came in third

Pretty Eve, a precious find.

 

God gave watch to all in line

Men gave in to their desire

Giants born upon the earth

Enticed by Eve’s passion fire.

 

Prayed the Lord her soul to keep

She lay sleeping in the night

Dreaming of her mighty men

In their dreams they hold her tight.

 

God reached out and Jobe came back

Satan’s fiery passion died

Adam had to look for work

God loved Eve. She was his pride.

 

*Jobe is of course a reference to the biblical Job.

 

2011 © By Dayvid Graybill


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 Reviews of "Eve and God"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 30, 2011
They didn't teach like this in Sunday school. If they had I might have stuck around. Patrick

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2011
Wowwwwwww..great writing indeed dear man...stay safe and well..Hugsss

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 25, 2011
You have brought us on quite a journey with this one Dayvid. Intensely fantastic!

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on January 24, 2011
I think I learned from your writing. Great write!!


Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 24, 2011
Hey Dayvid, you're b a c k!
Whimsical and playful poem here... like it!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 24, 2011
I would say it is a different take on our forebearers...thanks to them now we are imperfect...I wonder if we would have done any better avoiding the serpents advice.

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on January 24, 2011
VERY Interesting!

Reviewed on January 24, 2011
Awesome perspective Dayvid
& also true to the core as women
do have a mightiness power over man

into purity's light & temptations beackon
Vickie

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 24, 2011
Very well done, Dayvid.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2011
Rephaim giants, Satan, Adamic race, gardens, temptation, God, Eve the earth-healer, Serpent Brotherhood... this lyrical piece has it all man, strong writing top to bottom. enjoyed!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 23, 2011
A unique and interesting way of looking at the biblical tale, Dayvid. Thanks for sharing. Love, peace, and blessings,

Regis


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