Pale and translucent skin,
That's what he loved most on her.
Her presence made a chill in the air.
Even from down the hall,
His skin tingled.
She was shadowless and graceful,
Like the light moved especially for her.
To make her more achingly beautiful than he remembered.
He watched.
Stalked...
Reaquainting himself with every curve,
As she lie, unaware, on the floor.
His touch passed,
As softly as a breath of air.
Yet it was he who trembled.
She still had that effect on him.
She always will...
That was something time would never change.
And with a kiss,
He surrendered...
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Reviews of "Moonlight On The Floor"
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2004
It’s very easy to see where you get your talent from Poet. I have often wondered if in fact, you were related to someone who’s friendship I treasure very much, and now I know. This pleasure some piece is very well-penned, with excellent visuals and delightful romanticism, pouring gracefully off the page. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
Miss Priss. Your poem is very tender and quiet. Just as the moment transpires the inner voice sighs too. Lovely and soooo YOU Mariah.
Love,
Mom...see you this weekend.
Allen