This endless consession,
Of knowing somebody who knows someone,
Who knows someone,
Who used to know you.
Back when you were healthy.
When your mind didn't misgive hope,
False hopes.
Back then, hope was real...
Now, nothing but a badly painted picture,
From a selective memory.
Because now, that's all she has,
Within these soft white walls,
Away from the sharp edges of the world.
Hugging herself tightly because it's the one thing she's allowed to do.
Or forced to do...
The people move cautiously now.
Say premeditated nice things,
To a premedicated, lucid mind.
The one that put her here.
The one that hurt her the most.
The only one left who tells the truth.
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Reviews of "Clinical"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2004
This is an eye-opening, somewhat gritty, poem. A trip down a lost and lonesome highway where even the good guys are suspect. You brought the terror of being isolated by stone walls and mental inability to cope very well. Hell of a job. Okay, migive. Couldn't find it so I assume it is a typo.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Reindeer