you have captured the fear, here, and yes, this is intriguing, dark...& daring, great piece, Mariah!

hmm. Interesting. Good.

Great work, Mariah.
Amor

Well written. Like your mama's response to your too.

~E

Oh My mariah, You scare the peers we have here at Author' Den. I'm not so sure that you and Ann Rice aren't too close company sometimes. Gracie is a lil girl who died in the Colonial days. She is seen many times in the attic of The Davenport House in historic Savannah. Her tale is chilling as are the spirits who return to Bonaventure Cemetary where the likes of Johnny Mercer, John Pierpont, my father and other famous people play on other's minds. Don't be afrai for voices and ghosts areharmless messengers ad an immortal way to justify FORVER>

Wonderful emotional piece my dear. As always you make your Momma proud.

Love,
Mom

Dark but excellent write!!!

Well written, scary to some.Others may not leave home. You did a very good job of scaring many.
TY
Tony:)

this was so so scary it was awesomely dark and vivid with nightmarish qualities bravo on an excellent poem

Dark and scary write. You have set up the atmostphere so well. Your words are like black magic weaving.....and weaving.....

Sandie Angel :o)