why do I suddenly find myself singing "Just an old fashioned love song," by 3 Dog Night? <g> I guess that's just the feeling this poem inspires within me. A refreshing reminder of romance! ;-)
IF I could fall asleep, I surely would!
I want to be there in them places and be swept awayyyyyyyy....
GREAT Pen Gene!
It's so nice to read YOU again!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive!
Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
What a place you have in you mind Gene...Great read Always
An old navigator's map spread out on the beach sand, a coconut to share, navigating by the Southern Cross and Draco in far-away lands, just inches away from a seafarer's sextant giving rise to the moment, yes Let Us Be Us...billowy sailing to you, Gene...
A beautiful romp with characters of the classics! Thank you fo bringing us, the why of being us. Your words fit nicely, and the poem reads like the dream that it is. - Bill
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2008
...this has an honest healing touch to it; the laying of hands effect; how one finds themselves in the agony and ecstasy of another. . .even bringing the agony and ecstasy upon their w.hole BEing, like tides, in and out. .. and the sound.breaking.. .the intimate details, the intimate knowledge and memorials created along a desert.ed beauty. ..this feels, period; it jsut feels. .. youve gone from sound and its landscapes to skin and its escapes; im expecting a sight soon. .. .a vision of closed eyed understanding, of blending and bonding and something nearly breaking [barriers] that Echos, all senses. ... .again, this 'feels'. ...and i feel it, these words.
sublime and aching++anessa
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2008
In long nectarous nights,
let us toast, touch…
map the constellations,
count the stars:
loves me,
loves me not,
loves me!
These are my favorite lines from this beautiful poem. You are a fine writer, yes, but more than that - you are an inspiration.
Yes, I concur, let us all be far from the assault of city lights and everything left unsaid that goes along with that description while we are visiting the shady side of lust. I like the sound of that.
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
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I want to be there in them places and be swept awayyyyyyyy....
GREAT Pen Gene!
It's so nice to read YOU again!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive!
Love,
Sage
Newfie hugs, Rose
sublime and aching++anessa
let us toast, touch…
map the constellations,
count the stars:
loves me,
loves me not,
loves me!
These are my favorite lines from this beautiful poem. You are a fine writer, yes, but more than that - you are an inspiration.
"Let us visit
the shady side of lust,
the wicked cadence of the surf,
uninhibited scream of gulls."
I Love Your Dancing Poem Gene!
I Feel The Happiness :)
and tempting passions :)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
John