It is not very easy to write this kind of poem
without making use of obvious cliches, and yet you succeeded.
I have especially enjoyed the beautiful sounds, the sensuous
alliterations.

Axilea

Ok someone best tell me how I missed this one for sure. A grreat write of sharing your loving side Gene. thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Gene, the erotic gods of love sing within your beautiful love poem of passions caress...
Lovely Poetry!!
Much Love & Happiness To You Always :)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Oh my,I do love these words sweet Gene....oh myyyyyyyyyyy...stay safe and well OK..keep smiling darlin....Hugs,much love too you

This poem is exquisite! The diversity of moods
is enhanced by the passion seething within...Wondrous Gene!

ET

So unique, this ability to write a poem that evokes serenity and excitement at once, masterfully penned Gene.

i can sense/see/feel\read the seductive internal rhythms of this, but t.here is some.thing more. . .. almsot a graceful, spiritual undercurrent. .. [or maybe im projecting]...how could i not though, with all the mentions of gods and eternities ebbing and flowing beneatha dna round. . .. a climax of more than bodies, but minds, and souls. .. .a culmination of blues and hues of want and sacrifice and prayer.....i relly think im making my word voodoo dolls here, but isnt that the beauty of all arts? the reader immersed,,,,liquified, made whole or rapturous or both. ..
and i am left thirsty in the wake of this..
in the w.ache of this. ..
in the waking bliss.
nessa

Very soothingly erotic, I love this poem, nicely done, Gene.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

This is so well described and lushly set - it makes a man wish to hell he had been there - as a participant - pant - pant - pant!

To me this is a moment alone with nature be it deep in the wilderness of mountains or along the shore with the tide crashing against the sands and sliding in with a foam of bubbles--a soothing sound. A commune with nature--one with where we came from.

Sexy, sultry, seductive and romantic! HUGS! SC