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Recluse: Recurring Nightmare
by Gene Williamson → (All Poetry by Gene Williamson)
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He slides in and out of sleep,
abandoned in a gormless realm inhabited
by the everybodies who acknowledge
likebodies. Nobody knows him.
He is dispelled by hollow rites muffled
inside cavelike houses, gray specters seated
on petrified bones, imprisoned
in joyless laughter.

Under street lamps spitting green flames
lurks a council of insensate warlords
with wooly hair, flanked
by hooded hags and horned reptiles;
closing in on him a ragged army
of boorish grunts whose gnarled minds
propel them along dreary streets.

Pallid sons of some serpent spirit
of sleepless sleep emerge from catacombs,
stalk him, taunt him the alien, shred
his cultivated cloak, attempt to disabuse him,
rob him of reason
and identity.

He is the threat, the ominous tramontane,
the unsullied wind from the north,
the foreigner, casualty of restless intellect
trapped in obscurity.

Guided by the black sun,
he seeks a way out of this decaying realm
down dank infested alleys,
gags on the stench of monster scorpions,
grave worms, killer ants, feasting
on the spoils of demented dogs.

He flees the foul odors
to arid border canals laced
with poison briers and jagged rocks,
havens for pit vipers lying in wait,
scratches his way up seamless inclines
that go nowhere and never end.

Watched by dimwitted demons
who size him up the social miscreant,
he stumbles, pursued into the bowels of the night;
awakens to the arrhythmic toll of bells
in a time unknown, panics.

In this hostile state of delirium,
he confronts his gotterdammerung,
a menacing shadow silhouetted
on the wall of his will
to stay awake.
 
 

 


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 Reviews of "Recluse: Recurring Nightmare"
Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
This one makes me want to make sure the doors and windows are secure, then turn on all the lights and walk inside for an hour until I've calmed down. Unfortunately, there's a daily world which reminds me of Poe, his remark about (& I can't quote exactly) ...madness with horrible interludes of sanity. So much of this "dream" IS just outside our windows...
(& I love "gormless")

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2009
egads...the alliteration/assonance alone is enough to taunt and tilt minds and souls...some kind of edwardian tick tock menace. .. . .where shadows are really reapers raptured and backwards eyes look so so much deeper inward....than outward.. .. . .mental ward collapse and restraint, this feels like sonambulism, sleep.less and less and less. . .. ..
in that place where the grace of a mind slips freely in and out of fear and panic and dementia and delusion and dread. . .. .
and the way youve conjured a head.case.space and all its frenetic.ism.....the things it spits [sp]out and despises......
is chilling and thrilling and makes me feel absolutely itchy and demented when i read of all the black slithery things that beg to be noticed; where is the garish light when you need it?

such is the beginning of the beginning of the end of sunshine;
the solstice mad.man stands alone................

he needs a chamber.mate.
this is so tell.tale.telling.....
indeed.
nessxo

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 26, 2009
the capture of an unwilling soul in the grips of nocturnal turmoil --the subconscious overwhelms the defenseless senses and preys upon the frailty that is humankind -- we labor in the travails where darkness is the master of our imagination -- escape to pleasant thought, is itself, a demo-nous lined journey -- and first light, an ally we embrace while still quaking in the bed of disbelief -- Gene, a dark place where rest is the impossible dream -- your pen strikes out with an authority of personal experience -- these messages are seldom carried solely upon the wings of creativity, or imagination --peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 26, 2009
Darkly captivating, Gene; the imagery and the alliteration give the verses a lot of "punch." Well done indeed! Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on September 26, 2009
dasly halloweenish versing mean Gene, kind of rminds me of Michael, and his hell, all doped up, too doped to sleep, over doped to get him to sleep, in the end, too much dope help kill him, and the stupid doctor blew his pay check, he should have known michaels heart wasn't strong enough

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on September 25, 2009
If there was a thing that could be both captivating and eerie this is it. I love it!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 24, 2009
Out of this world and through your words come one of my nights Gene. It is to the point I have to have a night light on and now I will need two. A great write and thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 23, 2009
i sank right into this nightmarish poem ,stupendous gene...

Reviewed on September 23, 2009
and to think I thought I was a recluse in my dances with isolation...ahhh...not even close to this masterful escape into your nightmare of expression...wonderful read...and the suspension of prominant feelings....
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on September 23, 2009
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Gene - Recluse: Recurring Nightmare strikes me as how the alienated see the "normal" world:

He slides in and out of sleep,
abandoned in a gormless realm inhabited
by the everybodies who acknowledge
likebodies. Nobody knows him.

and how he confronts the ostracism and maintains his individuality:

In this hostile state of delirium,
he confronts his gotterdammerung,
a menacing shadow silhouetted
on the wall of his will
to stay awake.

- David

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
This is so concretely defined and described for us here, Gene, so as to not allow our minds and imaginations the easy way out and wriggle free from this icy grip by means of the "fantasy" let-out clause (claws?!) I don't mean that this is yer average, everyday experience (hopefully!), but that each of us can relate to it, perhaps, to very bad nightmares that we have ACTUALLY experienced when sick or clinically "drugged-up". It has the effect on me of being soooooooo real, in fact, that at this point in reading I would happily nail my eyelids to the bathroom door to ensure that I do not fall asleep, rather than to face the prospect of encountering what you here describe.... such is your power of suggestion and evocation. On the other hand, from the point of view of the recluse, I find this also fascinating: even after a few days entirely on my own, I start to find that I view the world and others in a slightly exaggerated way... which could easily turn malevolent under different circumstances.... Interesting, to say the least! :)) xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
captivating, finely tuned imagery and motif ...

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Dark, with vivid descriptions. I like how one scene unfolds into the next. Thanks for sharing this.
Sheila

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
I would stay awake at all costs. Sounds like what I would envision hell to be. This is very powerful and something I too have endured, mostly when on morphine in a hospital setting. big Yuk. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Oh my ...your writing is awesome sweet Gene woww this is great...well done indeed ...stay safe and well..Hugss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoox

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Gene, as always, your use of language is incredible...and your imagery, chilling...but it's your last stanza that I like best!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Fantastic, can feel the chills of a nightmare dancing in the macabre through such expertise....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Sounds like most of my many sleepless nights where I listen for death coming. Powerful.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Gene,
You force me to go with you into the twilight of the gods, a place I try to avoid but am drawn to by my own nature, and drawn by your splendid, powerful pen, a noose and a magnet. Superbly written, each verse a personal halloween, the entire poem a dark public occasion.

John

Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Gene, I am deeply unsettled by your dream, as I should be. The images are powerful, and your use of the language is exquisite. The first and fourth stanzas stand out for me:

"He slides in and out of sleep, / abandoned in a gormless realm inhabited / by the everybodies who acknowledge / likebodies. Nobody knows him."

"He is the threat, the ominous tramontane, / the unsullied wind from the north, / the foreigner, casualty of restless intellect / trapped in obscurity."

I am seldom left speechless... ~leslie

Reviewed on September 21, 2009
What an UnSaints Eve you bring early to us, Gene! This stretches our imagination of how horrific a nightmare can be. Was it something you ate...or of "something" to be? Oooooohhh...grizzly.
Blessings, Love, and Better Dreams - Micke

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
This poem pull from the memory Wagner's somber and apocalyptic visions, and Dante's phantasmagorical descriptions of dreams metamorphosis into nightmares.
A strong statement from a tortured soul taking over the inspirational muse to guide the poet's hand.

Georg


Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Tales from the Crypt secured in the vault of a ramshackle WAR jungle outpost, abode of the catfish hunters having a fondness for "hogging" - worming their fingers into submerged logs to pry loose reclusive fish, dragging nets through cobwebs of intact skeletons. There's a multitude of cataloging of cogitative language on the hook here, Gene. Shirt-soaking sweat wringing out poetry in a decadent tropical understory of the grim reaper doing low crawls in the area of the latrines hearing the death knell...

"pursued into the bowels of the night;
awakens to the arrhythmic toll of bells
in a time unknown, panics.

...flashback!

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Where does one go from here? These lines leave a thick, black, crawling veil that permeates the reader. Words burrow into the skin and find their way to the weak points where they pulsate and wait for the dark of night when they can invade the brain and manifest in the most horrific nightmare. I remember reading once that creative genius is enhanced by mind-bending dreams, or was it that mind-bending dreams are enhanced by creative genius?

Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Dang, Gene. This creepy little number may crawl into my dreams tonight. Chillingly penned, love the silibant sounds of terror enclosed within these lines. Well done!

((((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Sounds lik esomebodys med time...man I thought I had some bad dreams...WOW...nice write there mer . recluse I mean GeeeeeNe
stan

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Chilling indeed! The images evoked creep and crawl and makes one shiver...The true horror is that there is a reality in this piece that many understand... well done, my friend!

Myrna

Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Chilling piece, Gene, but o, so well written! Well done; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Gene--this is incredible. HP Lovecraft comes alive and jumps into your pen!! What an amazing piece of horror!! I love it.


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