blue haiku number two (poem) by Gene Williamson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 2, 2011

Gene, you mixed the perfect cocktail of innocent love observed and enhanced by the moon and that "voyeuristic" gull's intrusion of serenade? "blue haiku" is a two step into a sensuous rendezvous with the awkward foray into the pleasures of youthful awakening. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2011

Sighhhh...oh my ...you have taken my breath completly away with your beautiful writing sweet sweet Gene...sighhh...wowwwwwwwww....now darlin this is hotttttt.....Hugsss
Love Always,
Chanti xoxoxo....Sighhhhhhhhh

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 28, 2011

wowa...beeeeautiful~

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on April 28, 2011

Now that is hot...well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 28, 2011

So dusky and sensuous Gene, love it.

Carole~

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 28, 2011

SPLENDID. YOUR UNIQUE PHRASES HAVE SKETCHED A VIVID PICTURE OF...A SUMMER'S MOONLIT BEACH. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 28, 2011

Each a gem in its own right, Gene; together an ensembled jewel...
strong, ever so sensual and written superbly.

John

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 28, 2011

WOW!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 28, 2011

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

outstanding & sensual. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

Ah, the cry in the wilderness channeled through the gull!
Wonderful how you give this such a fresh take, Gene...from unconscious girl to full-fledged womanhood so sincerely told.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

Gene, I think my computer just melted! LOL WOW!! Hot stuff here, man!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

Gene, Oh my this is a hot one!!!! So sexy! WOW! Climaxed by a voyeuristic gull's ardent cry. I'm lovin this one my friend. Take care. :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

Great, sensual and imaginative writing, Gene.

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

This is cunningly done, Gene. Very sensual, love it. Dick

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

Wow, this love epic was outstanding.
Peace
Tony

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

Very interesting first stanza, Gene - and the rest, well, let's just say everything's better "in sync." Love this!

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

The sand and the foam of romance...well done, Gene!
Incoming waves of passion...outgoing satisfaction.

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

those damn voyeur gulls, they oughtta' be locked up! this is a great piece gene, captures the whole deal on every level.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

Them gulls just can't keep to themselves, can they? Bet ya that one was my alter ego...I just love watching lovers make love while trying to hide in the dunes...Jerseeeeeeeey gull

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on April 27, 2011

Nicely done....Wonderful imagery inspired here, Gene...ah! the days of youth and discovery...those were the best of times......

Anna