Living In The Now (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Such brutal honesty in your writes Anita that always tell it like it is. If we could all envision the time when our blood lines were all immigrants then perhaps we could stop thinking of the new as foreigners.

Fee

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Great write my friend!

Jack

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

I would Imagine that it's what we do with what we're given, and who it brings glory too, that matters the most.

It certainly is a moment by moment decsion making process (life) that reveals who we are as individuals, and also how we feel about our fellow man.

What a cogent write Alice. Chiselpecks approves, and so do I. Bloody well written. I'll be thinking about this one the rest of the bloody day. kudos!

Unity unwavering ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Anita hitting the nail on the head!however,the path we travel does influence where we wind up, so we must be ever alert on the way;-)
Superb, poet!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

All those eager avenues waiting to be travelled in a new land we have landed.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

A deep offering Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

You make me think very deeply about things...the image and the words combined pack a powerful punch. And what a finish you closed with on this! Panda :)

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

I have just reviewed Karla's poem and I must repeat myself, for you ended this poem right. It is what we have done with our life that counts, how we end this life. Great poem, Anita.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Well, living in the present, forget about the past, lookin forward to the future is not so bad.

Fantastic write Anita! I love the picture too!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Wow Anita

You come up with the goods..

You are the Seer of the Den..

It's what we do with the hand that counts in the final analysis..

Love
Peter

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Oh what a great, insightful poem! A keeper! Thank you!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Excellent, Anita; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

Its not what you start with, its how you end up right??

RIGHT!!

And I find that photo most intriguing. I'd love to peek into some of those.

And you changed the photo, just as I wrote this! Now this picture is fascinating, too!