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Intoxicate Me Sane
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The shell must break before the bird can fly.-Alfred, Lord Tennyson 


 


Intoxicate Me Sane
 
 
Pour a poem all over me
Like dulcet honeyed rain
Christened eyes reborn and wise
Past scripted terrains
 
Fill my eyes with words and sound
Of lilting serenades
Tune a double canter
Upon a cavalcade
 
Magic form, transcending norm
Unshackled persuasions
Raining down, cerebral crown
Rhythmical  invasions
 
Pour a poem all over me
Like dulcet honeyed rain
A wine of rhyme and lunacy
Intoxicate me sane
 
From the heights of visioned sights
A flight past logic's gates
Enter now  the world of poem
Enter and create
 
Pax
A
 
10/23/06


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 Reviews of "Intoxicate Me Sane"
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on October 29, 2006
Loved this one.

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2006
This is a gorgeous piece with such powerfully moving choice of words. It is inspiring to the aspiring writer of verse. I will keep this one around for reading over and over again!
~Butch

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

"Intoxicate Me Sane"
Well written form and execution.
Quite enjoyable!

Loved it, loved it!
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Oh my, how beautiful this poem is, so lovely, absolutely loved this beautiful poem.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
Love, Love This, yes, from title through beginning to 'enter and create'...this poem really did soar in my mind in reading, what an Inspiration...BRAVO! (and then some, wondrous piece!)

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
One of your best ones Anita. Enjoyed this greatly-

Peace & Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 25, 2006
PERFECTION!!! What need to say more? I'll just take me a bath in one now... and a bottle of this on ice for later! Totally intoxiKated xx

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2006
Very nice work

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on October 25, 2006
A beautiful, inspired poem, A Pax! I enjoyed it tremendously. Well done.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Rich and classey poetry.
Highly talented piece...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 24, 2006
Enter now the world of poem
Enter and create

Marvelous, Queenie!

Reviewed on October 24, 2006
I am delightfully drunk with this poem, totally wide eyed and legless - blissfully intoxicated. A provocative oxymoron as the title, always intruiging. Toxic substances normally unbalance the thought processes,even the sober onlooker as he watches the intoxicated man's behaviour becomes intoxicated (anxious) by his unsocial influence. Not so with this poem. Its toxic influence is aromatic, like the smell of sweet honey ascending to tease the nostrils of our imaginings. Indeed, as the verbal use of the word suggests, it intoxicates one sane, but not with a sanity that the real world can cope with or understand - not any longer. The sanity in question requires a lease of life in another world. I'll take a flight to that world and its 'visioned heights', Anita, fueled by a crystal glass of your intoxicating, choicest 'wine of rhyme'.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
This poem ...Pax
Is outstanding
Loved it a sure keeper
thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
enter and create

a poem where dreamers soar

beyond the gates of enchantment

and through unopened doors





obviously, this poem has more than inspired me ... you have a certain ability to entice as well as create ... and that makes a great combination ... you imagery and poetic sentiment are a rare and welcome treat ...

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
One always wishes to open such a gate and find creativity, to some it's easy, to others it's not. Very creative poem. Victor

Reviewed by William Haynes
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Simply beautiful
Bill

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
This is beyond incredible! I love it totally and wish I wrote it! Just for that I'll call you A POX...;-) hahaha okay color me green!
ET

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Funny how so many of us herein are into sanity today...or the lack thereof...e & r

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Original thoughts with creative buzz. This one is a winner if ever there was one. I LOVE IT!!!
Susan

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Oh yes, pure honey poem from the heavenly hive.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Very inspiring write and the lines so origianal in this one, it flows soft and curvy like the path of a stream through a forest. Great stuff my friend.

Fee

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Beautiful as always my friend :)

Jack

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
A very alluring and mysterious journey into the world of creativity and spontaneity, pre-requisites for the professional poet..

We have the opportunity to show our most subtle dimensions, when we craft our words straight from our heart and subconscious..

Your originality and modus operandi are on full display here Anita..

Peter

Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
This is luxuriously sweet!Iam drunk by just this verses of yours' and I now have become intoxicatingly sane.

Bom Bhole!
Roshan

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Simply beautiful. I enjoyed every word.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Your poetry shines as it lifts the reader to soar with your magical wings.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Excellent write Anita!!

Love the Picture!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Enchanting, Anita. I love your style of writing. Pure enchantment.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
This is hundred proof stuff. Beautiful.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
You are intoxication everyone hear sane with your poetry. Another image filled romp in the dulcet honeyed rain.
Rusty

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
Wow Anita!

I enjoyed this. Like those special poems poets occasionally write are the keys to ones sanity.

Love your use of the repeating simile: "Like dulcet honeyed rain"
Very soothing. And the image is to die for.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
BELLISIMO!!! APPLAUSE!!!

PAX, THIS IS AN AWESOME PACKAGE! YOU BLOW ME AWAY...

Love&Hugs, Rhonda
PS>A wine of rhyme and lunacy + the italian bread.....see you at GE!!


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