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INSIDE ALIVE, APART
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INSIDE ALIVE, APART For years she lived inside herself Disconnected from fleshy vessel Comparmentalized behind blue eyes Ignoring all, she'd wrestle There beneath a surface life Preserved and insulated Stacked the years, without a tear Her seperate self....created Knock knock, who's there Do you remember me I'm sorry but we've never met The mirror said to .....she I once knew, a SOUL like you A slice of sun in mist Brightly shining through the storms Until the lighting kissed Zap, slap, a walking nap A zombie with a heart Trained to live with blinders Inside alive.......apart PAX A 5/18/08 �

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Reviews of "INSIDE ALIVE, APART"

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on July 7, 2008

I love the feeling this gives of a "wake-up call." And the wonderfully perplexing feel of 'internal conflict.' -- Jeff

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

Wowie! Did you see behind my blue eyes?
Cryssa

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

Very thought provoking ans worthy of being read and reread...

Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 18, 2008

A powerful and thought provoking write my friend, written with excellence and wonderful imagery that brings it to life!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on May 18, 2008

Excellent use of language!
I love the way you develop this -
the image of the one that is trapped inside.

Axilea

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 18, 2008

Electric words and imagery, poet!

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 18, 2008

I once knew, a SOUL like you
A slice of sun in mist
Brightly shining through the storms
Until the lighting kissed

Zap, slap, a walking nap
A zombie with a heart
Trained to live with blinders
Inside alive.......apart

... Sheer brilliance and in your own inimitable style, Anita. A slice of sun in mist... totally delicious! TY Kate xx :))

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on May 18, 2008

Surreal... and provocative. --Charlie

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on May 18, 2008

Love it. I've tried to live inside out. Ain't easy.
Gene.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 18, 2008

This one is powerfully penned, Lady A, very well written!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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